[2nd Alt] Habbo Bus™

[Kallot]

Its amazing what you can do when you start with a rectangle, this second alt is amazing and im quite proud of it.

Wheel was C+P'd from Inner Habbo Infobus and then edited just so you know, rest is from scratch.

I need to learn how to make glass decently though.

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/351/secondalt1lj9.png

Rate /10 + C&C, Thanks.

[Echo54321]

too simple, more detail, out of shape, sizing is wrong, the winderscreen wipers dont dut it, the wheels are too big n not habbo-ish, headlights are bad, front is just flat, no detail on windows

0/10

[ItsDave]

too simple, more detail, out of shape, sizing is wrong, the winderscreen wipers dont dut it, the wheels are too big n not habbo-ish, headlights are bad, front is just flat, no detail on windows

0/10

I cant be bothered to type all of that. So yeah... thats what I would say

[Echo54321]

I cant be bothered to type all of that. So yeah... thats what I would say


you used me :( lol

[Kallot]

too simple, more detail, out of shape, sizing is wrong, the winderscreen wipers dont dut it, the wheels are too big n not habbo-ish, headlights are bad, front is just flat, no detail on windows

0/10


0/10? wow... go by a real rating system, not one which results in alts you like getting 10/10 and ones you hate getting 0/10.

I told everyone i have only made 2 alts atleast im not ripping or making little scribbles which arent isometric. :rolleyes:

If your going to post achually make C+C and don't just come here to insult alterations.

[Chocobos]

Its ok, 6/10.

Try making it less square, editing the windwipers and adding more shading.

It could be lush... +Rep if you improve.

[Kallot]

Improved:

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/7739/secondalt1be3.png

What do you think?

Still thinking on how to de-square it.

[Chocobos]

It looks better slightly but its still a box, think carefully about how to de-square it and edit the background please.

7/10 now.

[Gangster]

nice, what are those things sitching out the window at the front?

[Kallot]

Windshield wipers mate :)

O.o ill show you what im going to leave this alt at:

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/1695/secondalt1ol7.png

Leaving it at that because its too much of a hard alt for my low skill to handle.

[Yux]

It's nice, look at the Hotel Views for Habbo Style glass, http://www.habborator.org/hotels/

Maybe look at a real bus and add in detail from that :)

[Kallot]

Habbos hotel views have nice glass effects, i use MS Paint so everything is quite hard.

[Boonzeet]

the wheels are too big n not habbo-ish,

0/10


Wheel was C+P'd from Inner Habbo Infobus.

:rolleyes:


Habbos hotel views have nice glass effects, i use MS Paint so everything is quite hard.

I use MS paint. Try search the forum for my work, or here:
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z94/Boonzeet/lul.png
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z94/Boonzeet/view_uk3Personal.gif

:)

[Kallot]

Boonz i mean glass effects, there are certain programs which make glass transparent easily.

Also, wheels we're edited slightly.

+ Its only my 2nd alt :l



0/10 - No effort whatsoever, probably little squiggles and saved as JPEG.
1/10 - Similar to 0/10 - Hardly any effort, maybe just a recolored all one colour habbo...
2/10 - possible a poorly shaded maybe isometric box. Maybe many pixel errors, maybe poor quality (JPEG)
3/10 - A bit better, the object is taking shape and maybe minor attempts at shading, but still hundreds of errors and mistakes - or all C+P.
4/10 - Shading makes a breakthrough here - but a lot of errors/poor detail and/or lack of imagination/effort.
5/10 - Your alt is Satisfactory. It isn't brilliant, but it's isometric (if needed) it's the right shape too. Harsh colours/pixel errors/stolen or C+P is common here too.
6/10 - The alteration now counts as good. It has nice colours to it, less C+P (although if pulled off C+P can look superb) and good shading.
7/10 - A nice alteration - Good detail, nice colours, brilliant idea/well pulled off. C+P can be used still to pull of good alterations
8/10 - Very Good Alteration - Nice detail, superb choice of colours, shaded well, more then a box, maybe complex shapes too.
9/10 - Amazing alteration - Brilliant detail, looks nice on the eye, perfect shading (but maybe a pixel error ;o)
10/10 - worthy of the status "elite". This alteration is flawless!



Wouldnt this make my alt erm.. 5/10 or 6/10? Just wondering because its your system.

So dont quote saying its 0/10.

[PaulMacC]

I like it, it's unique.
for that Im giving you
6.5/10

[Kallot]

Thanks :)

[Echo54321]

Because of my post, Which SAYS EVERYTHING YOU NEED TO IMPROVE THAT IS PRETTY GOOD CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM, HE GAVE ME A - REP!, IF EVERYONE JUST SED YH ITS GREAT, YOU WOULD CARRY ON MAKING SH1T ONES LIKE THAT

[Kallot]

I did not give you a -Rep as i have 0 rep power, how can i give a red rep with no rep power... also you pointlessly -Rep'd me which should be punished.

think before you post.

Also what you said:


too simple, more detail, out of shape, sizing is wrong, the winderscreen wipers dont dut it, the wheels are too big n not habbo-ish, headlights are bad, front is just flat, no detail on windows

0/10

Thats more rudeness than constructive critism.

[Sabbath]

:rolleyes:



I use MS paint. Try search the forum for my work, or here:
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z94/Boonzeet/lul.png
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z94/Boonzeet/view_uk3Personal.gif

:)


DONT BE A SHOWOFF!


AND KALLOT THAT IS CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, YOU JUST CANT HANDLE THE TRUTH!

[Sulai]

y hav u said trade mark lol.... trade mark to wht ??

[O]

Its too square.. its needs to be abit more round? If you get me, its too box like. It needs shading as well, the tyres are really good.. They look like ones on infobuses.. But, the windscreenwiper things need to have alot more shape and shading, the lights need to look more 3D? Needs more shading, its abit short too.. The bits around the wheels are ok. Overall i rate it 5/10 :]

[Kallot]

I thought it was too square too personally :P but i couldnt do anything about it.

Btw, they are the wheels from the info bus which i edited slightly, as i said on first post :)

Thanks for your C+C,
Kallot.

[Bibliophobia]

to simple!

the lack of shading and dithering is a shame

maybe too much for you to do so soon

[Duck Hunt]

ono Giant Spikes Gonna Kill Me If i Get Hit o.O
Lol Edit The Window Wipers :) Thats One Main Thing.
MAke Door Bigger
Dont Rip :P I See u Made It Ontop Of Somebody's Car Alt Cuz Im Sure u Didnt Make The Wheels. Well Done For A Second. 6.5/10

[Boonzeet]

DONT BE A SHOWOFF!


AND KALLOT THAT IS CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, YOU JUST CANT HANDLE THE TRUTH!

:(


*cowers in corner and cries to sleep*

[Kallot]

ono Giant Spikes Gonna Kill Me If i Get Hit o.O
Lol Edit The Window Wipers :) Thats One Main Thing.
MAke Door Bigger
Dont Rip :P I See u Made It Ontop Of Somebody's Car Alt Cuz Im Sure u Didnt Make The Wheels. Well Done For A Second. 6.5/10

I did not rip, i used the Infobus wheels then edited em' like i posted in my first post.

I made my own rectangle and edited it to look more bus-like.

Thanks for your C+C nevertheless.

Ps. aww boonz. :(

[Alkaz]

The wheels are awsome.

[TheRealUberSock]

The only part with any detail on it is the wheels, which as you said yourself, are Habbo made.

2/10, lots of room for improvement.

[Finkelstien]

Its ok, no great shakes but over all a 7/10 from my side. Keep it up.