[3rd Alt] Chocolate Bar™

[Kallot]

Woo, i was only doing this as a practice but it turned out pretty nice so i decided... why not turn it into an alt?

Chocolate/Wooden Furniture :)

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1662/tutresultoe3.png

Also... i put a Naruto Character alt which i made recently there randomly, dont ask why... heh.

Rate /10, and give me some C+C so i can improve...

Thanks.

[VPSwow]

I like. I think the stools should be a bit smaller though :D

[Ashhizzle]

as above, its like the bars are footrests ;)

[Kallot]

You guys are right, i did em a little big because im sat on a stool which is gigantic.

now brb, i need a drink lol.

[Kyle]

They need shadows, and I don't really like the stools much, but that's just my opinion I guess, I'd rate it.... 8/10 ;)

[Kallot]

Thats what i forgot! - Shadows lol.

I felt like it was missing something but i couldnt achually remember what.

Heres a smaller stool (It looks bad though):

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/8407/j03f0rm3xe1.png

[Chocobos]

That smaller stool is ok achually, 6/10 for new stool.

Nice for a 3rd, try simpler stuff though.

[Yux]

It's nice, loving the pun :P The blinds on the window are a bit dodgy but well done. I look forward to work from you in the future :)

[Boonzeet]

rae you chocobos r not lol

it looks okay but your gonna improve over timei know ==]

[Bibliophobia]

its ok but you need to learn to texture and to shade

and to create realistic and geometrically correct shapes

[O]

Your getting better at these :) They look abit big and need to look abit more woody, 6/10 :)

[7]

Your getting better at these :) They look abit big and need to look abit more woody, 6/10 :)

i agree :)

[Kallot]

i agree :)

I learned how to make wood from the Isometric tutorial, it worked out nicely :D

[Shrile]

nice pillow

[Scuzzy]

I love that! Very well done.

[Nuxty]

Very well done. As I always say submit your ideas to Habbo! :P

10/10