My first alt from scratch..

[Steven]

Hello, this is my first try at a alteration [properly anyway] It took me quite a while , so please give me some good critisim and reputation

remember it's my first time ever!
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y247/rottenmarmalade/firsteveralt.bmp

I hope it was ok for a first time , but yeah I dont usually do pixel art/alts

[Refocus]

The top of the comp is a bit wonky :P habbo furni usually use lines with 2 pixles in each section of the line if that makes any sence to anybody :$ but its ok for ur 1st :) 7/10

[Yayse]

looks quite good ste! especially for a first. maybe try making your furniture using a grid the same as the habbo floor, perhaps look at previous furniture alts. Still, its brill.. heh that rhymed.. rep+

[MYKE!]

Its ok, if you practice you'll get much better. :)

[Kyle.tk]

Needs to be isometric, if you'd of made it isometric, it would of been 10/10

[RedStratocas]

:) Very good for a first

My tutorial called "Basic furni Tutorial" in the graphics help section, will explain how to get it isometric, and make a good cube.

[Roboevil]

We all love cubes...
Look's weired, mabye as it's your first you just need practise!

[Jules]

good for ur first ;)

[Dreams...]

great great effort esoescially from scratch big up to ya ste :)

[Dreams...]

great great effort ste especially from scratch big up to u ! :)

[cuddlecute]

Thats cool but i think that you shpuld delete the stuff on the screen it ruins it

[Steven]

Thanks for you nice comments.

[RunescapePK]

2/10. read a tutorial.

[stonesey]

not bad dude, it needs to be isometrical to look great, i dont tike the computer part of it, the monitor is a bit wierd, and like someone said earlier, usually the top line is 2 pixelseach part, so yeh... 5/10

[samuel]

Lots better then my first alt, belive me.
(and my first alt was a colored cube.) :]
7/10 for first alt.
habbo has a grid of lines which you got on your keyboard. on the computer and screen make the tops and bottoms the same way you did you keyboard.
Which will just start you off for now, but still..
Sam likie. x]

[Nenzy.]

well i think its quite gd, i ent even gunna dare make an alt yet, think of all the bad comments id get wud be a stack, (if tht makes sense) im nt 2 gd at alts, tried b4, it crashed and burned, lol :rolleyes:

[lukeisok]

Excellent first try.

8/10.

[Noble]

Very good for your first alteration from scratch I must say, good work.

[-bedford-]

not bad for ur first alt from scratch mate 10/10

[Jashmine]

Not bad for a first xD But yeah, what everyone else said.
And may I add I think you are looking particularly hawt today?