The Great... um... Swiss Cheese Bar?

[Rarenerd]

Like the title? Rate /20, I seem to have gotten better with /20 than /10 :) for my first 2 alts, here we go now, here we go now :p I had to jpeg it unluckily :(

[evect]

Aw, sorry to burst your bubble and all but that alt is quite poor. Is cheese grey? Doesn't cheese have holes in it? What about shading? Here, I'll give you some help. Check out this link:

http://www.pixelfreak.com/tutorial/

2/10 - Keep practising and use that link I gave you to a tutorial to help you.

[Skitgraves]

err....what is it?

:s

[Rarenerd]

It's a bar that's made of swiss cheese, the holes are the holes, the shadow in the holes is all you see, because assuming the light is straight up, the shadow would be in the holes, AND I said /20 not /10, ALSO AND I don't read! *very annoyed* :@ :@

[evect]

1.The holes dont look like holes, they are flat. Give them depth.
2.There is no lightsource.
3.Habbo furniture has black outlines.
4.Cheese is yellow.. Last time I checked.
5.It's square? Cheese is more rounded than a block.
6.JPEG quality. Needs to be .PNG

Also, you say you don't read yet you reply to my posts? I'm not trying to be picky here, I'm trying to help you to improve. If you don't want to improve, thats fine, I'm only helping.

Regards

[terrapin905]

erm..its odd..what can i say lol :S 2/10

[piratemenno]

2 minuts?
1/10 :eusa_shhh

[Mobs!]

i thought u was tryin to do a dirty brick lol 1/20 like u sed out of 20

[Incher]

0/20 do real bricks :)

[Infrontation]

1:Quite Poor
2: Is Chees Grey?
3: No Shading
4: Rating : 2/20

P.s. I Know Rares Values Better+I can Make Alts Better. :)

[Barnsley]

wots it ment to be. it looks like a fishtank full of cement

[P@ND@]

Swiss Cheese Bar, I thought cheese was yellow but I like the idea lol
20/20 xD (I mean that!)

[Arcanum]

Umm, sorry to say, I don't like it. The shading, colouring and creativity of it is really poor and as Daz said, Habbo furni has black outlines. 1/20, 1 point for the idea :)

[P@ND@]

I really like it, You coud use it as bar, Table, Food...

[dudey345]

ummmmm i still dunno wat it is :S

[P@ND@]

Swiss Chees,e Delicious, its Old swiss cheese, it turned grey

[silgon]

Errrrm what can i say i really hope for your sake cheese in your house isn't cray if it is i think you need a bomb disposal squad lol.

Anyway like many other people have said:
1. There is no sign of any shading
2.No black out lines
3.not habboish
5/20

[Frewb]

Agreeing with other members here it really doesn't look like a piece of cheese, maybe a block of cement or something but not cheese... consider reading peoples posts through and you should be able to improve it. :8

[P@ND@]

Cheese, Long live cheese!

[Frewb]

And here we hit the wall of insanity :eusa_wall

[P@ND@]

I've gone trough that wall already :p

[Frewb]

Oh... ok then... hmm... maybe you need some mental cement for that wall :P

[P@ND@]

Wall's gun, Only Bamboo now, trying to eat my waytrough here!

[Rarenerd]

thanks for the 20, wow, but the others were not too great, Swiss cheese is white if you actually look at it, one of the only holey cheeses is swiss, which is white, look in your fridge and see if you have swiss, you'll see what I mean, and I can't save as PEG :eusa_doh:

[evect]

As PEG? I take it you mean .PNG :p

EDIT:I'll show you how.. in MSpaint(Paint)
To save as .PNG. Get your original un-saved image. Click Save and name your file, eg sofa. Now put on the end of that .PNG. So now you'll have sofa.PNG And the quality will be good and the filesize will be low.

Don't worry about the thing below that, it doesnt matter.

[Rarenerd]

yeah whatever :$, oh, and it was done COMPLETLY from scratch

[P@ND@]

What is Scratch anyway?

[Rarenerd]

scratch means 100% original

[P@ND@]

Ah, I see...

[Rarenerd]

original... and no help.... :P

[terrapin905]

i made my tv from scratch too and everyone hates it lol..

[P@ND@]

Paint pwns :p
Shade whit 10 more or less light:p