[BIO] Le Club Moderne. [Final]

[jackass]

After months of releasing a new alt, I am now in the middle of a brand new one and I thought I would release the final version of my 'Modern club' alt. It is the final of this 'area', but I am thinking of expanding it at some point. Hope you like it. (This is also one of my graphics for my portfolio). :)

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/3340/layout58final1660896573kg7.gif

[Sulai]

somethings are nice.

others are'nt.

[today]

Some of it doesnt match other parts (style) Pooltable wood has more detail compared to the pooltable top ect?

Some has detail other parts have nothing.

[jackass]

Everything has detail apart from the top of the walls? :S

I did actually add detail to it, but it didn't go at all.

And its all the same colour scheme, so I fail to see how it doesn't go?

[today]

The walls are all one colour
The laptop screen seems too smooth and doeskt go as well with blackoutline.
The pooltable if your having black lines on the top have it on the bottom (were the wood is too) doesnt look right to me without / half black half not.

The "bars" top seem too plain and flat.

[Boonzeet]

Sorry but this must fail

Siz CLEARLY declared you no longer have permission to use his alts.

They should be removed or this isn't entirely yours.

[jackass]

Sorry but this must fail

Siz CLEARLY declared you no longer have permission to use his alts.

They should be removed or this isn't entirely yours.

I didn't use his alt, I used the layout of the computer which I changed. Also, he already gave me permission, and I already made the alt, so its too late for him to go back on his decision.

Anyway, thanks for your comments so far, It seems I might have to make another version after all.

[Boonzeet]

It's good except for the computer which looks blatantly awful...

9/10 quite nice =]

[jackass]

It's good except for the computer which looks blatantly awful...

9/10 quite nice =]

Thanks for your slightly nicer comment. :)

[Nuka-Cola]

Nice alt i think it all goes and the lights are cool the beach seen thing is it a tv ??? dont quite get it but its and ace place and i would go there ( i LOVE the couches )


SIZ if you look has been banned on this forum he might come back as another name but he has been BANNED so even if he did say yes he cant go back on his decision cause he dont own an account on HxF

[jackass]

Nice alt i think it all goes and the lights are cool the beach seen thing is it a tv ??? dont quite get it but its and ace place and i would go there ( i LOVE the couches )


SIZ if you look has been banned on this forum he might come back as another name but he has been BANNED so even if he did say yes he cant go back on his decision cause he dont own an account on HxF

Thanks very much. The beach think is a movie on the projector (see the desk!) ;)

And you have a good taste with loving the couches. :8

[Nuka-Cola]

Thanks very much. The beach think is a movie on the projector (see the desk!) ;)

And you have a good taste with loving the couches. :8


Ah i see the projecter now i thought it was a credit card thing or a place to keep money.

And sure il go with u tht i got good style lol but yh i love the sofas

and the whole place is very modern

Edit : would rep but i gota spread :(((((

[Everlong]

Nice alt i think it all goes and the lights are cool the beach seen thing is it a tv ??? dont quite get it but its and ace place and i would go there ( i LOVE the couches )


SIZ if you look has been banned on this forum he might come back as another name but he has been BANNED so even if he did say yes he cant go back on his decision cause he dont own an account on HxF

Smartie305 = Siz
As for the alt its quite simple but cool, i think it would have been better if you made the whole alt on your own, i like it though good luck on the Graphics job.

Edit: Im not trying to be offensive but there are allot of pixel errors that need to be sorted out also

[jackass]

Smartie305 = Siz
As for the alt its quite simple but cool, i think it would have been better if you made the whole alt on your own, i like it though good luck on the Graphics job.

Edit: Im not trying to be offensive but there are allot of pixel errors that need to be sorted out also

I did do it all myself? :S

And can you PM me the pixel errors please?

[Everlong]

I did do it all myself? :S

And can you PM me the pixel errors please?


i thaught you said the comp was siz'z and you edited it, i'll point some out but its mainly minor stuff.

[jackass]

i thaught you said the comp was siz'z and you edited it, i'll point some out but its mainly minor stuff.

What I meant was, the layout was made by Siz, but I drew it myself, from the idea.

[Everlong]

What I meant was, the layout was made by Siz, but I drew it myself, from the idea.

Oh ok i stand corrected.

[O]

It's ok i spose
6/10

[jackass]

It amazes me how bad recolours get 'AMAZING 10/10'.

Yet I get 'its okay, 6/10'...

I know mines not excellent, but i'm talking a about good alts in general.

[Higgimug]

Is it me or do the sofas look like excecutive sofas?

They recolours with a few tweaks?

[Duck Hunt]

This Is Just All Your Alts In One room ;[ Theres Not Much Of It i Dont Recognize. And Those Are recoloured Executive Sofas. Im 95% Sure

[Browney]

Sofa looks like executive sofas, ping pong is edited from Boxiel's or something and the computer looks like Siz's. And the bars I plain hate.

[Bibliophobia]

few errors
mainly to do with shading an texturing

[jackass]

Thanks for all the positive comments. :rolleyes:

Forget it.