Jabbatown concept furniture

[arP1987]

http://www.freewebs.com/arp1987/jabcon.PNG

rate and c+c pls
and the dimensions are for jabba not habbo
so dont say its a brick to short or anything :P

[Steven]

Nice well done !

[Sank]

They look alright, I guess.. The sofas are too dark.

[knibble1234]

look good so i say you should post them on jabba

[Y!]

needs shading, 7/10.

[Bear-Max]

I like them, but the far side's front corner sticks out at an odd angle...

8/10

[arP1987]

@ sank, its concept they might gonna be lighter and changed + the idea was to create a typical 1980's sofa
those were mainly black
@knibble they are already but I appreciate the C+C of the habboxforum users
@Specie look again it has tons of shading, so if u can point me out where it needs more/less shading ur welcome
@Bear not really I just see the shading of that bit is a bit off Ill fix that soon

ty for replying

[Timber.]

they are good 8|10

[GommeInc]

I agree with Bear-Max, the right of the sofa's jots out at a weird angle.

But other than that very good :D 8/10

[Punky]

The shading looks a bit weird....Shouldn't it be the other way round? Your darker bits should be lighter and vise versa. Well that's how it seems to me.

I love the shelves though. :)

[arP1987]

The shading looks a bit weird....Shouldn't it be the other way round? Your darker bits should be lighter and vise versa. Well that's how it seems to me.

I love the shelves though. :)

no the top is shone upon so thats defoo lighter


@ bear u were right bout the corner so I redid it
also I retoned and changed the front ogf the shelfs slightly

http://www.freewebs.com/arp1987/jabconup.PNG

[Azza]

the sofas on seat part look odd rest of thems fine and shelf things r fine
9/10

[GommeInc]

The seats look alot better now, good job

[stonesey]

they're pretty good, slightly too dark and the shelves are almost the lodge ones :p 7/10

[DamoTurps]

Black Sofas are too dark. use like a dark grey.

[arP1987]

Black Sofas are too dark. use like a dark grey.

recoloring is easy I could make em green so thats not a big issue I supose

the shelfs dont come close to the lodge 1s


anyway thnx for the replys

[CrazyCali]

sank is you think u are better then everyone else then leave
other wise the alt is good i like it

[hedgeog325]

Good

8/10 :D

[Blader_Boy]

shelves are fine 9/10

the sofas are good however i think the colours are too bright you need to dull the colours then they will be perfect!

are you anyway involved with jabba btw?

[Noble]

I like these! The shading on them is great, people shouldn't be so harsh on them, may be constructive but he must have put so much time and effort making these, I'll give you 9/10, very well done.

[RunescapePK]

5/10 you need to work on it alot. add some contrast to those sofas and make aa the wood.

[arP1987]

Hmm Im not better than any1 else there loadsa people who make better designs than me, I only disagree with some opinions ;-)

btw u may be harsch I can learn from it and thats the main point

and Ive spended the needed hours on em but not as much as some of my other "alts" liek the fire engine and golf course, also I already spended more hours on my unfinished lambo, so thats ok

I btw DO agree with the fact they still need work

thanks for giving replys

arP

[arP1987]

5/10 you need to work on it alot. add some contrast to those sofas and make aa the wood.

make aa the wood? u care to explain?

soz for double post