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Magnet
08-06-2005, 09:04 PM
Made 100% scratch ;)

Rating and C&C took quite a long time!

http://img118.echo.cx/img118/5412/habbohouse7hq.png

Manda
08-06-2005, 09:06 PM
The grass is too "green" well too bright green. Add some texture into the grass..The windows look like holes in the house. The bricks look nice.. but um.

5/10

Magnet
08-06-2005, 09:07 PM
Ok I'll edit it RIGHT NOW!

EDIT: I'm not too good with drawing windows!

Sank
08-06-2005, 09:10 PM
The scale of the house is far too big.

Magnet
08-06-2005, 09:12 PM
Scale......?

Yayse
08-06-2005, 09:26 PM
doesnt the horizon suddenly get higher to the right? or is that just me.... >.< still, pretty cool, altho starting off small an progressing from that might help?

Manda
08-06-2005, 09:37 PM
doesnt the horizon suddenly get higher to the right? or is that just me.... >.< still, pretty cool, altho starting off small an progressing from that might help?
The horizon Is messed up. It doesnt continue the same line. And how come the grass continues into the house?

Jenna
08-06-2005, 09:38 PM
Really good effort :D

Add some texture to the grass and darken it a bit
Maybe add a little more shadng to the Bricks

7.5/10
Once again really great effort :D

MakeBelieve..
08-06-2005, 09:50 PM
:D the green seems.. alot a little to big but thats pretty good you can be a bit creative by using petals for grass :$ thats just a suggestion ;oooo

Y!
08-06-2005, 10:26 PM
It's oversized, but pleasent 7/10.

Dave
08-06-2005, 11:33 PM
The walls are paper thin :|

poke it ant itll fall down. and the door inside is tiny. youd have to crawl thru it :(

Magnet
09-06-2005, 03:27 PM
What do you guys mean by over-sized?


I've also made the walls thicker, I've used petals as the floor and am making the windows better now!

Sank
09-06-2005, 04:16 PM
Scale......?
Scale, means like, the furniture, such as the box in the loft, is extremly small compared the to size of the house. So I say the house needs to be alot smaller, and it might look better.

Also the horrizon needs to be sorted out, and some texture in the grass and sky.

Noble
09-06-2005, 06:00 PM
Doesn't look bad, but at the very top of the roof there are a few spaces which are white, I like it, 7/10.

Joe.
09-06-2005, 06:52 PM
tried very hard there 8/10 the grass isnt grass tho. normal grass has stumps n daisys in it and has a texture and not that colour

Depleted
09-06-2005, 09:28 PM
You should add some roof tiles on, itll look much better :P and trust me, itll get really boring ive done it before lol

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