First Alt - Kitchen [WIP]

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This is my Kitchen.
That I shall link on to a living room.

Like Drake and Josh :D

Hence the window in the wall. :D

/10 and constructive criticism please! x


http://i25.tinypic.com/2lj5mht.png


EDIT: THIS IS NOT COMPLETE.

[oJosh..]

Hello. This is ok. But i don't really like it. It's good for a first attempt.

Keep trying, you will get better.

EDIT: Forgot to rate it. I reckon about 6.5/10 -- Well done!

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thanks for feedback

[oJosh..]

Thats ok :)

[GommeInc]

Hmmm, the sink is sort of a seperate body to the counter, so maybe the taps would look better with a black/dark grey outline? Perhaps removing or shortening the window seal would be another thing to do, it doesn't look right in that alt and the counter needs to be hightlighted in the bend (or what looks like a bend.

Not looking too bad though :) Keep improving.