[Luke] Party invite design

[Forge]

Hey im booking out a nightclub soon to host a party (pop of course ;))
I made this invite design for the occasion. What ya' think?
It's the actual size of the invite card :P

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/1301/ticketyr5.png

Thanks
- Luke

[Invent]

I don't like the green or the font style on the grey part. Oh and I'm not keen on the gradient on the blue box.

[Forge]

So none of it then? :P

[Invent]

The pink part is nice and the concept is nice. It just looks a little too premade for me.

[sgraham]

You have came a long way since your last design, the pink box towards the bottom really fits with the vibrant atmosphere. of the design.

You need to work on the other boxes. For example, experiment with other tones of green as sadly, the current one just doesn't quite fit it, and bring the design to life, maybe by a glow effect to the title to really grab the reader's attention.

Your main target should be to liven it up a bit, remember, it's a party not a funeral.

Good work, keep on trying!

[Forge]

The main ideas was to make it hard to copy which i think i've done :P

EDIT (seen scott's post): The text has glow with a 2px stroke of the font colour but abit darker. I don't think that the design is boring enough to be for a funeral lol :P unless Elton John died? :P

[php.net]

This would cost a bit to print off!

[Forge]

True. But the price per ticket for the venue is around £1.50 and the printing cost per ticket wouldn't be alot.

[RichardKnox]

I laughed at the Elton John funeral reference.

Anyway, it's a nice piece of work, well done. Only thing I would say is I agree with Scott about the printing costs.

Keep it up mate :)

[360]

It's nice

the gray box is too big, and for the final version you'll need to put the actual adress of the venue!

[Forge]

Thanks for the comments but realised ive had interest from over 100 people so a £5 each thats £500 and the venue cost £150. So there's plenty of cash for the printing :P

[php.net]

I laughed at the Elton John funeral reference.

Anyway, it's a nice piece of work, well done. Only thing I would say is I agree with Scott about the printing costs.

Keep it up mate :)


AHEM?!?! "The Stig", please.

[theJOSH]

The Stig, didn't make an insultful comment to the graphical designer
or a generally good comment.

[Bojangles]

Not too keen on the Green and Blue but the pink and grey go well. Well done Forge :)

[Crazy Bartender]

It looks good :D

[chrisgocrazyH]

uhhh, Well what type of party is it for 1? i like it but i dont at the same time? Invites DONT have to be fancy?

[Forge]

uhhh, Well what type of party is it for 1? i like it but i dont at the same time? Invites DONT have to be fancy?

Nothing has to be fancy. Web designs dont have to be fancy but the designer (in most cases) chooses to.
I made them like this so they aren't copied easily as i dont want prats coming.