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Vause
11-06-2005, 06:26 PM
I love you

If there's one face I want to see,
so beautiful, so true,
one smile that makes a difference,
to everything I do.

If there's one touch I long to feel,
one voice I long to hear,
whenever I am happy,
or just needing someone near.

If there's one joy, one love,
from which I never want to part,
its you, my very special love,
my world, my life, my heart.


What do you guys think of my poem??
Tell Me Your Comments!
<3 Matt <3

KickerFliper
11-06-2005, 07:35 PM
Its Beautiful ;)

Ayeeeee Emma ♥

10/10

joeyjo21
11-06-2005, 07:54 PM
That poem is really beautiful. Did you really write that? its amazing!!! 10/10 i loved it :-) :o and rep 2

Detox
11-06-2005, 08:15 PM
Awww
Nice poem, good work

Steven
11-06-2005, 08:17 PM
I feel like that about Angela.

Mr.Kylee
11-06-2005, 08:38 PM
Aw you love me :D <3 *checks name under the poem* Hm, mistake?

^^
It's very nice poem write more.

Vause
11-06-2005, 08:44 PM
Aww thanks! Its really old, in english last year we did it! :']

Painiac
12-06-2005, 05:10 PM
Beautiful.... Don't think I should disgrace the page with my presence for much longer... 9/10 always room for improvement... but don't change that ;)

:.bEx.:
12-06-2005, 05:14 PM
aww emma its great awsome poem ;)

gum
12-06-2005, 06:02 PM
that poem is awesome 10/10 + rep

Vause
12-06-2005, 08:25 PM
aww ty guys! i hope matt likes it ;o!

Krypsis
12-06-2005, 08:48 PM
Emma its great well done, Hmm psst jin emma needs a writer job :)

Vause
12-06-2005, 08:50 PM
Emma its great well done, Hmm psst jin emma needs a writer job :)

LOL!

:) thanks

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