GCSE Music Stuff

[:Edzy]

Anyone Wanna comment on my gcse music composition, it seems something is missing. rate /10 and comment pls :)

Argh this uploader is pantsing about, ill try a different one and post the new link
(http://www.9records.com/uploads/58y71wzuj0muag2r/COMP222s.mp3)

[whoooosh]

its telling me i need a password or something

[BobX]

just put it on youtube

[bizzle]

What bob said use youtube.

[:Edzy]

Youtube is TOO public

http://mp3space.com/file/29347/comp222s

need to improve vocals. i have a cold and might pitch it down.

i composed everything except the words

the words are s club 7 - sunshine. was suppposed to be happy lol

[:Edzy]

http://mp3space.com/file/29347/comp222s

is the new link :)