My Competition Entries (2)

[Ardemax]

Here are the Ghost Train and Water Ride entries I did:

First one:
This was the Ghost Train entry.
Room was called: G-G-Ghost Train!

http://i27.tinypic.com/2e49fn7.png

Second one:
This was the Water Ride entry
Room was called: WaterSlide Tower

http://i30.tinypic.com/4kck8m.png

None of them got even a point for my team :(

What do you think of them?

[iAdam]

They look cool, I'll try them out now.

[Ardemax]

They look cool, I'll try them out now.

lol, you can only visit the Ghost Train.
But thanks for that, +rep!

[Slowpoke]

I didn't like the ghost trian, you should of used to mood light to make it darker. I like the water ride though, well done :)

[Meti]

Lol. Nice ones xD The water ride looks great and fun :)

well done!

[Shoed]

There both really bad.

[Ardemax]

I didn't like the ghost trian, you should of used to mood light to make it darker. I like the water ride though, well done :)

Thanks.
+Rep


There both really bad.

There is a thing such as advice?

[mlp16]

more scary/halloweeen furni?

[GhostFace-]

they didn't win because they aren't all that great, sorry.

[shizzle]

1st one doesn't look like a ghost train.
2nd one is alright, but not interesting.

[Ardemax]

more scary/halloweeen furni?

I would've, but couldn't get creds.


1st one doesn't look like a ghost train.
2nd one is alright, but not interesting.

Hmmm, improvements?

[e5]

First one looks very over crowded and messy, second one is better but lacks furni :P

Overall 5/10

[Minstrels]

First one sucks. Second one sucks.
The first one is to jumbled, you should have made it darker and got black knight rollers. You should have also put mummy posters along with the walls to make it scary, why have you got televisions in there? The second one looks dull, why did you use black chairs for a water ride, why not blue? Why not use
blue pods to make it seem more watery? Why even stack those pods like that, it makes the floor look dull, you should have put blue mats under and around the pods. :rolleyes:

[Nain]

the first one isnt to great but i like the second

in the second you should remove the mode bars and leave it like that, but if you need to put lodge corners there :)

[shizzle]

I would've, but couldn't get creds.



Hmmm, improvements?
Room 2. It looks different z's lodge etc mixed together is not nice try use simliar type of furni.

[Ardemax]

First one sucks. Second one sucks.
The first one is to jumbled, you should have made it darker and got black knight rollers. You should have also put mummy posters along with the walls to make it scary, why have you got televisions in there? The second one looks dull, why did you use black chairs for a water ride, why not blue? Why not use
blue pods to make it seem more watery? Why even stack those pods like that, it makes the floor look dull, you should have put blue mats under and around the pods. :rolleyes:


Well, you're full of negative stuff.
And thanks, you know, 'sucks'.
Why have I got televisions in there?
It's for the photo screens you get.
And I know they're not the best, but you still shouldn't comment like that.

[Nereo]

second one is ok:D

first one just looks like a load of furni in a room, doesnt work:(

[Ardemax]

Thanks for the feedback.

[Minstrels]

Well, you're full of negative stuff.
And thanks, you know, 'sucks'.
Why have I got televisions in there?
It's for the photo screens you get.
And I know they're not the best, but you still shouldn't comment like that.
You asked or feedback when you posted them in here, if you can't take it don't post anymore? :rolleyes:

[Ardemax]

You asked or feedback when you posted them in here, if you can't take it don't post anymore? :rolleyes:

I'm just saying you're so negative about everything. And yes I can take it, it's just those that don't have anythig nice to say about anything. Thanks :)

[Minstrels]

I'm just saying you're so negative about everything. And yes I can take it, it's just those that don't have anythig nice to say about anything. Thanks :)
I would have something nice to say about them if they WERE nice however they're poor so they get so called 'negative' feedback yeah?