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kingkong5555
29-03-2008, 12:57 PM
This was my first ever "big" project that i made, i made it some time ago, but just found it on my photo bucket :D rate it? ill try and get back into doing this sort of stuff
http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff318/bugsyboy5555/prison5.png

Manson
29-03-2008, 01:43 PM
just do this and youll see it looks much better

make the innerlines lighter than the color of the object.
so if the object is browu, sellect a light brown coller for the innerline.

-Eyeless-
29-03-2008, 02:00 PM
just do this and youll see it looks much better

make the innerlines lighter than the color of the object.
so if the object is browu, sellect a light brown coller for the innerline.

Good advice :)

Its really good for a first "big" project... 7/10

If you make the prison grounds a bit more realistic (usually dusty grounds, make it a bit larger... etc) It will be good :)

e5
29-03-2008, 02:02 PM
Not that, a little small though. 7/10.

DarkSquiffy
29-03-2008, 02:08 PM
Windows are a bit sideways but who cares its awesome =]

Describe
29-03-2008, 04:53 PM
It's a good example of Isometric ETC.

ThomJ
31-03-2008, 05:50 AM
very easy to make its just a building with windows

Lee.
31-03-2008, 05:53 AM
I think it looks very good, nice work. I'd like to see a prisoner standing in the yard. :)

kingkong5555
31-03-2008, 10:50 AM
thomj, im not gunna be like all the others who say "its my first try leave me alone" but i WILL say this. SHUT UP or say something CONSTRUCTIVE!

-Undiscovered
31-03-2008, 02:20 PM
I like it. :]

7
31-03-2008, 02:22 PM
not too bad :)

Jahova
02-04-2008, 10:36 AM
That is pretty good, I see you have taken time.
Try and clear up the pixel errors though, they get annoying ;)

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