Mcdonals theater

[lewissmiffy]

Took me about 1 hour please tell me wat you thing (NOTE) This is my second animation

Edit i got it workin

[Gangster]

no image

[lewissmiffy]

Took me about 1 hour please tell me wat you thing (NOTE) This is my second animation

Edit i got it workin


no image
There is now

[Casio]

Animation :l

[Pix]

Not good. Sorry

[lewissmiffy]

as i said i did it in 1 hour i rushed it i will make another soon

[GhostFace-]

1. alteration not animation
2. colors are to harsh.
3. way to many errros.

[Gangster]

thats not a animation

[Zebroid]

1. Do not rush alterations.
2. Tone the colours down
3. Touch up on the lines
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[Everlong]

You really need to look at some other alts and work out what your doing.

[Swinkid]

as i said i did it in 1 hour i rushed it i will make another soon
I could do better in a hour to be honest, and stop using paint's default colors.

[-AzX]

Ive said this to many pixel artists.

Don't post anything on a forum untill you are 100% satisfied with it yourself, because if you're not, its most likely others wont be either.

It's not a race to see how many alts you can make in a day, some of the best habbo alterations took weeks and months to perfect.

Remember quality, not quantity.

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I have quite a bit of CC for you

1) Always save in PNG, Jpeg is for photography.

2) Tone down the colours you use, never use paint's default colours.

3) When making alts you need to make sure the lines are perfectly isometrical, if they're not, imo its classed as a poor alteration.

Theres room for improvement, but take peoples criticism and improve on your work. In time you will get better, so keep trying and trying :)

[Ace-Corn]

1.Its not an animation
2.It cant be done in 1 hour, more like, 10 minutes..
3.Did you save it as png?
4.To much errors
5.The logo is only copy paste
6.And the colours look like someone was drunk when they made it
7.No shading
8.Colours ARE to harsh
9.Some things is not coloured right
10. Start over

[-Eyeless-]

I honestly think I might be sick, or do my eyes decieve me? THOSE COLOURS ARE BRIGHT AND DISGUSTING, although so is maccie d's :S lol spend time on it and dont rush!!!!

[DarkSquiffy]

Ive said this to many pixel artists.

Don't post anything on a forum untill you are 100% satisfied with it yourself, because if you're not, its most likely others wont be either.

It's not a race to see how many alts you can make in a day, some of the best habbo alterations took weeks and months to perfect.

Remember quality, not quantity.


Couldnt have said it better myself.
Sounds silly but you shouldnt post something unless you think its as good as the other alts on here otherwise you'll get loads of negative feedback [:

Keep working on it. It still looks like a sketchy wip tbh.

[aaronboy123]

I really don't like it. Those colors are way too bright, and it doesn't look to me
like a Habbo place. Sorry, but it's just my opinion.

[Bonxy]

can i say rubbish?

[shizzle]

There is no animate, don't use the built in paint :)

[Abi-xx]

Very blurry.. 8-)

[Ace-Corn]

To be honestly, i need to put tabasco in my eyes to make this one look good.
Sorry.

[Swearwolf]

try to colour inside the lines

[Smartie305]

1. alteration not animation
2. colors are to harsh.
3. way to many errros.

[greggy23]

All I Can Say Is. Crap
You've used paints default colours
You could of made You Own McDonalds Sign
Try keeping in the lines and use shading

[O]

I don't really like it, sorry :(

[iAdam]

Tone down the colours, straighten the lines, go to Image > Draw opaque for the fries and logo.

[hoozy.02]

as i said i did it in 1 hour i rushed it i will make another soon

No offence, but an hour is quite long and that isn't very good xD. Keep trying though. Start off with smaller avatar alts, like characters nd that, and slowly build up as you progress. Make sure that color stays within the black lines (the fill tool is your friend!) and that you save images as better quality formats such as .bmp and .png.

[Peanut]

the colours awful


to bright

and it looks dodgy

3-10

[:totaled::]

try saving it as .PNG for better quality =] use habbos colours and shade it

[Fehm]

Lol, Yh Shading ;) and toning the colours down a little bit, after thats its not a bad alt!