Room Review.

[Sulai]

The last time I posted an article was around november 2007, now that im back, i need to get the hang of using the tools again.


my personal opinion is that its fine.

what do you think about it?

http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3778/102/

[Plux]

Better grammar would be better, a much more detailed description.

November 2007 isn't so far away.

[Crimson]

You've missed out some small little things;

"The only reason i came across..." Should be a capital I.
"...and to be onest..." x]
"The skeleton poster near the Crypt to low." Should be 'too' and you don't have full depth information, it should be; "The skeleton poster near the Crypt is too low."

Only some minor errors, but it's very nice! :]
There are other errors, but I don't want to sound too picky!

[GhostFace-]

yea your grammar is a bit off but nice article.