Second doll =]

[esmii]

Ok heres my second doll..

I wanted to do something different than a normal doll, so i created the outfit myself and the hair.. The inspiration for the plaits is from a tutorial i did.
Ok the base is from the xxandora site (cant remember the spelling) when i work it out ill edit this post and add a link to it =]
Constructive critism is welcome!
Remember ive just started so its a bit bland and poo =P
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/esmii/elf.bmp

[Broken-Tear]

Rite thats ok for a second go but i have some c&c for u. On the clothes they kinda look a bit skin tight. Try makin the clothes a bit baggier. Also the shadin on the top around the edges, why dont you make it a bit lighter because it looks a bit bold. Also a bit of the shadin looks like you just scribbled it on paint. The hair is nice but try and indicate some strands and make them stand out. Hope thats useful :)

[esmii]

yeah its very helpful ty =]

[Noble]

Wow, for a second doll, that is very good! 10/10 +rep if allowed.

[kasi]

Maybe some shading on shorts? but other than that its good 7/10

[.Amberz.]

:o Thats very good. 10/10

[Ferccia]

Pretty good for your second doll! =]
9/10 Wd :D