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!star--girl!
16-06-2005, 07:24 PM
Ok... it's bad :( But it's my first :) base from... :s
Grabbed
16-06-2005, 07:28 PM
v good 9/10
!star--girl!
16-06-2005, 07:28 PM
:o thankies!
Revenge
16-06-2005, 07:42 PM
Super for your first ^_^ i posted my first yesterday ^-^ her bosom looks very "contour" stylee...
Noble
16-06-2005, 07:44 PM
I like it, for a first it is fabulous, well done. 10/10 +rep if allowed to.
Ferccia
16-06-2005, 08:29 PM
9/10 Good job :)
Broken-Tear
16-06-2005, 08:35 PM
Ok. I have som c&c for you. The lines are a bit bold why dont you tone them down a bit. Also you no since the base has shadin? try not to use that try and make your own shadin on top of it. Try to define some more hair strands and make them stand out a bit more. Also try and make it a bit baggier the clothing. hope that helps you with ur dolls ^_^
ChloeDust
16-06-2005, 08:45 PM
It's good for a 1st well done, although the shading on the top looks a bit odd, try not going from a dark colour to a mega bright colour to shade as it looks a tad odd, also the head needs more hair on the top try; http://dtse.xandorra.net/ for some tutoritals on, shading, different hair styles, folds, clothes, accesories etc it's really good for help on dolls =P
Kekea
16-06-2005, 09:19 PM
Her top looks weird. I think you shaded the breasts wrong.
trunks.15
17-06-2005, 08:41 AM
prety good for ya first one star :) 7\10
!star--girl!
17-06-2005, 02:58 PM
thanks everyone :)
Jasmin
17-06-2005, 03:05 PM
Thats a really good doll for a first one =)
c&c : Maybe make the 3quaters flow out a lil, and try not to skin shade =) But since its yar first, ill let u off, haha lol mine was awful ! and for the hair, hmm shade it a lil more and add shine and stuff =)
Overal 8/10 Plus rep
Im Feeling Kind after last Night =(
(dont remind me)
!star--girl!
17-06-2005, 03:07 PM
thanks :)
hedgeog325
17-06-2005, 03:08 PM
good first doll
9/10
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