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Korronos
24-04-2008, 05:00 PM
http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff264/Korronos/Workinprogress.png

So yeah this is my Work In Progress
Please give me tips on what to improve and such and rate it so far :)

Thanks

Everlong
24-04-2008, 05:05 PM
I would put the image in the middle instead of randomly to the side.

luce
24-04-2008, 05:08 PM
Its pretty cool tbh :)
Well done

dbgtz
24-04-2008, 07:28 PM
Add the chair legs!! :)
Maybe design your own header/banner what ever you wanna call it?
Also maybe make the range too

Lyrical.Troop
24-04-2008, 07:30 PM
Chair legs and feet.

And bring the image a bit more < LEFT.

Korronos
24-04-2008, 07:30 PM
Add the chair legs!! :)
Maybe design your own header/banner what ever you wanna call it?
Also maybe make the range too

I will continue with it all tomorrow :)
This is it so far....
http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff264/Korronos/Workinprogress-1.png

Ace-Corn
25-04-2008, 11:04 AM
Actually, becuse habbo is... istrometic it does not look normal
with that.. habbo school boy sticker.
Otherwise its pretty good.

Fehm
29-04-2008, 03:06 PM
I was gonna put a coment then my dad started talking to me... So i forgot. but yh nice alt ;) Oh i remember, the 5credits thing shud be in the centerish? ive im correct. (If im not just say :D) lol

yh 8/10 so far :P

Boonzeet
29-04-2008, 03:43 PM
Okay, time for an analysis.
Criticism:

A) Why is the image at the side?
B) The table feet and pointed and look sharp? No no no.
C) Why is the table's perspective off? If you want a perspective like that, you'll have to add shading on the habbo to make it seem like a Vanishing point perspective.
D) The legs at the back of the VPP Table are longer then the front legs. I suggest you change that.
E) Is the dude cut in half ;-; Poor guy :3


Good Points:

A) Interesting perspective.
B) The table itself (the isometric one) Is actually pretty good, just not the items on it.
C) The colors fit well.

Improve on the bad points to make it better.

3 Stars ***

Jahova
29-04-2008, 05:11 PM
He's magically floating, WOW.
A bit off centre, don't you think..

- TomSpit

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