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1xBabyCakesx1
28-04-2008, 07:03 PM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll151/rosalee111/1a1aHabboAlt-1.jpg

My improvment On My Habbo Person The First One Was Said It Looked Like a Prostitute Sooo.... I Felt Sad And IMproved it!!!!:eusa_danc:eusa_danc:eusa_danc

Jahova
29-04-2008, 05:41 PM
Still looks dodgy, sorry.

- TomSpit

jackass
29-04-2008, 07:50 PM
Why are her breasts lopsided?

Ardemax
30-04-2008, 05:53 AM
That is very dodgy.
Looks like a 2 minute job.
2/10

luce
30-04-2008, 06:18 AM
its stil reli dodgey and her boobs point to us not to the front :P

1xBabyCakesx1
30-04-2008, 05:39 PM
I Dont See Why I Try Theres No Pleasing Some People :(:(

GhostFace-
30-04-2008, 10:07 PM
yee. still a prostitute.

-AzX
30-04-2008, 10:41 PM
I Dont See Why I Try Theres No Pleasing Some People :(:(

Take more time in your work.
If you have to spend a couple of days perfecting an alt, do it.

Use a habbo imager or take your habbo in a room and printscreen
instead of using the edit appearence screen.

If the chest is facing to the left, make sure her features are too.

Take more pride in your work hun. Habbo alterations aren't about who
can produce the most, its about who can produce the best.

If you have time, i recommend reading (and i mean reading, not just
skimming through text) tutorials on pixel art it will benefit you and
give you a deep understanding how to make pixel art.

5/10 for now.

Needs alot of improvement.

If you need any help be sure to pm me :)

WeeHabbo
30-04-2008, 10:54 PM
Not bad , 4/10

Boonzeet
01-05-2008, 03:11 AM
I Dont See Why I Try Theres No Pleasing Some People :(:(

We can't lie. Sometimes, truths have to be told. Otherwise you'll get put down by more serious and harsh graphics forums and won't improve.

Take some time on your work. I spend 2-4 hours per tiny peice I do. The Tapei 101 took 9 hours total to finish. Well, regard that I do make graphics like that for money.

Criticism (I don't want to put you down so I'm going to put it in a spoiler. Don't read it if you don't want to.

Is her hair made of cookie? Because it's dotted with Chocolate chips.
Her chest is so lopsided. It's like they pulled one of her boobs down during surgery or something and It got stuck there.

The mouth... needs so much work. It looks like she's eating or something.

As for the resolution... A common mistake for new people is to stretch their alts resolution. This is bigger then 2x the original. Use the zoom tool, not the resizer.

The quality of the image, is JPEG. Save as PNG, not BMP or JPG.

And it still looks like a prostitute in a slight way.



Sorry, but people aren't rating right. 2/10 because at least you didn't create an army of 'santers'.


If you read the above, it's only tips to improve. Because there aren't many good points here.

bo$$
01-05-2008, 03:27 AM
All you've done is add two little lines for bows on the shoe and lines for the boobs...

Still dodgey though, lol

Baby
01-05-2008, 06:29 AM
Its a nice idea but the bows on her shoes are angled the wrong and her tops facing the wrong way.
Nice try anyway :)

shizzle
01-05-2008, 07:46 PM
Why are her breasts lopsided?
Lmao, thats what I thought.

Cryptoo
02-05-2008, 09:35 AM
It might look better if you made it smaller to the size of a habbo in the hotel?

Fehm
02-05-2008, 10:15 AM
4.5/10 SOZ.. room for improvement ;) But youll get there eventually

Meti
02-05-2008, 10:18 AM
Sorry, but even I can do that better :)
Looks really bad.
1/10 for trying

Con
02-05-2008, 10:18 PM
The top still looks abit.. weird.

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