PC Monitor - Isometric

[jony080]

Nothing too special, I listened to some of the comments from my last alt. Added some gradient toning. I did two, one with the Habbo screen on, one with a blank screen.
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll134/jony080/flatscreenmonitor.png http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll134/jony080/monitorblank.png

Leave comments telling me what you think, how I could improve it, etc.

Thanks :D

[Supersam]

It looks great just not particularly like it would fit with Habbo's stlye....

9/10 though :)

[Javascrypt]

Nothing too special, I listened to some of the comments from my last alt. Added some gradient toning. I did two, one with the Habbo screen on, one with a blank screen.

http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll134/jony080/flatscreenmonitor.png http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll134/jony080/monitorblank.png


Leave comments telling me what you think, how I could improve it, etc.



Thanks :D


Nice, Like Said Above. Make It More Habbo'ish

[jony080]

Okay, thanks :D
When you say Habbo-ish, is that like without gradients, and with more curves?

[Hiro]

Okay, thanks :D
When you say Habbo-ish, is that like without gradients, and with more curves?

Yes, and 1px lines.
You can still use gradients, but they need to be a bit more pixelly rather than smooth.

[jony080]

Yes, and 1px lines.
You can still use gradients, but they need to be a bit more pixelly rather than smooth.

Actually, I did use 1px lines.
Okay, thanks :D

[Sulai]

maybe round the edges off abit, but very nice still :)

6.5/10

[scott]

Thats good, i like it :D!

[Con]

These are much better than the room alt

Well done, I like the shadind techniques :)

[luce]

There well good well done :)

[Boonzeet]

Despite what people say, this is infact not good. I'll make a quick image to show you why.

It's taking me too long, I'll type it.

DO NOT USE GRADIENTS!
That is one of the first and most important things to remember GRADIENTS ARE APPALING.

They do not look "Good" they look "effortless"

As for the outlines, come on? What were you USING to make this, flash? Paint is the only proper tool for Pixel art as it's the only one that doesn't give you crappy gradients.

Also, the shading makes no sense either. Why's the stand so dark?

I suggest you work on those before attempting again. Gradients are evil.

By "1px lines" He meant lines like the outline on this:
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z94/Boonzeet/MerryXmas.gif

No anti aliasing. That's a terrible thing to do.
No Gradients. That's awful, and most people think it looks great when it doesn't.

Also, to people reading this, No I'm not some offensive idiot, I'm someone who won't tell someone a lie no matter how harsh the truth.

[GhostFace-]

pretty nice.

8/10

[shizzle]

Nice, lol at the first screen.

[Fehm]

There rerli cool! Welldone :)

[Meti]

Nice one there :D
It doesn't look so Habbo'ish like some other people already have said..