well, Its a start

[Jasmin]

Im trying to get myslef back into dolls :) Please do not moan at me about the skirt, im trying to imrpove :( i like her top and shoes :) Thanks for veiwing
Jasmin x
Base http://apitchou.free.fr/minisite02.htm

http://tinypic.com/64kktw

[lauralol]

Jasmin, I thought after all the criticism you got you would try something new. But this doll STILL seems to be very similar to the rest. Maybe slightly different colours this time, but still..

As someone suggested in another thread, maybe try searching for an image on google and then base your doll on that, it will give you a challenge and it will look more original.

[Crumpets.]

Jaz, try and do a different hairstyle or a pair of pants? Nice doll though..

[AngJum]

I think the shading is quite good. And I don't think you should stop dolling just cause you aren't absolutely magnificent just now! But you do need to take critism to get better :) I like the doll

[Alex288]

2 be honest i dont really like the dolls, but i think the habbo fashion in ur signature is gr8 so i think u shud focus more on them

[zak-x]

It looks very nice but the legs are a bit too long 10/10 tho :D

[AngJum]

It looks very nice but the legs are a bit too long 10/10 tho :D

Are long legs not a good thing? Like Stacey keibler's (http://www.findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m0801/is_1_66/ai_n8583379)?

[Crying-Angel]

firstly - yes long legs are classed as attractive.... i dunno why it is but im happy coz i have really long legs lol....

secondly - youve done the top really well, different to how i would do it, but it looks better than the other ones u have done...

for the skirt, u need to remember that skirts have folds in them because they hang from the waist due to gravity and it all tries to hang straight down therefore making folds in the fabric...
firstly draw the two lines either side for the skirt, then draw separate lines inside the skirt, then at the bottom join it all up but make sure you make some of the joining lines curve in and some curve out. *see below*
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline.gif
once you have done that, make the outline the darkest colour in the palet, then with the second darkest make a shadow where the darkest shadows would be (ie. under the crease)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline1.gif
Then keep shading with the rest of the colours, making sure that the folds pounting out end up with the highlights as they are the ones which would get the light.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline2.gifhttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline3.gif

then you can put the patten on the skirt but make sure that you include shading on the parrten according to the shading on the skirt...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline4.gif

[Ev.]

OMG ADHFEA
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline.gif

YOUR BREAKING YOUR OWN RULEZZ [NUDISM]

Lol, I'm Jk`ing, those dolls must be hard to make, but for your original one, the legs are freakishly long for her tiny torso.

[Yayse]

i can see you're spending more time trying to improve on your folds jasmin, as you said you wanted to in a previous thread, and these folds are a great achievment but could be a little better and now danni has provided extra help, you can carry on making them work =] the hair is really good, i think thats one of your strong points and the top is done well. although as its been said before, maybe try to do a different style of doll. not just tops and mini skirts =] why not challenge yourself? 8/10

[Jasmin]

firstly - yes long legs are classed as attractive.... i dunno why it is but im happy coz i have really long legs lol....

secondly - youve done the top really well, different to how i would do it, but it looks better than the other ones u have done...

for the skirt, u need to remember that skirts have folds in them because they hang from the waist due to gravity and it all tries to hang straight down therefore making folds in the fabric...
firstly draw the two lines either side for the skirt, then draw separate lines inside the skirt, then at the bottom join it all up but make sure you make some of the joining lines curve in and some curve out. *see below*
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline.gif
once you have done that, make the outline the darkest colour in the palet, then with the second darkest make a shadow where the darkest shadows would be (ie. under the crease)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline1.gif
Then keep shading with the rest of the colours, making sure that the folds pounting out end up with the highlights as they are the ones which would get the light.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline2.gifhttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline3.gif

then you can put the patten on the skirt but make sure that you include shading on the parrten according to the shading on the skirt...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline4.gif


:D Thanks for the tut, its great, Ill get to work on a doll right Now :D

[kasi]

No offence or anything but your dolls sorta look the same.. :S In most of your dolls it has the same hair as that, and i find the skirt is too short for that leg length and the wrinkles/folds look sorta dodgey to me in the shirt..

but its just me.
6.7/10

[H!YA]

firstly - yes long legs are classed as attractive.... i dunno why it is but im happy coz i have really long legs lol....

secondly - youve done the top really well, different to how i would do it, but it looks better than the other ones u have done...

for the skirt, u need to remember that skirts have folds in them because they hang from the waist due to gravity and it all tries to hang straight down therefore making folds in the fabric...
firstly draw the two lines either side for the skirt, then draw separate lines inside the skirt, then at the bottom join it all up but make sure you make some of the joining lines curve in and some curve out. *see below*
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline.gif
once you have done that, make the outline the darkest colour in the palet, then with the second darkest make a shadow where the darkest shadows would be (ie. under the crease)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline1.gif
Then keep shading with the rest of the colours, making sure that the folds pounting out end up with the highlights as they are the ones which would get the light.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline2.gifhttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline3.gif

then you can put the patten on the skirt but make sure that you include shading on the parrten according to the shading on the skirt...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/lil_miss_pink/skirtoutline4.gif


first bit is true ;) i seen ;o

[Pulchritudinous]

Looks like an outfit out of mean girls...I like it!
Although it's not very eye-catching, try adding accessories to her or something.

9/10.

[Ferccia]

Very nice :)
Its a great start! :D
Nicely done :]]