[Banner WIP] Jedi Temple

[hoozy.02]

I'm trying to recreate this banner my friend made using Habbo alterations.

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z24/Picsel7/TheYODA.jpg

Heres the Jedi Temple alt:

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c88/hoozy2/temple8.png

Its missing a lot of detail, but I didn't want it to look to busy. Also, the colours have been boosted in order to make it stand out more than it does in the original image, because the colours in the banner are too faint because of the lighting. And the background in the original image was too hard to draw xD.

[luce]

i think they look quite good well done :)

[PaintYourTarget]

Instead of the black inside lines, I think you need a lighter sand coloured highlight. Great explanation I know.
Good for lineart, can't wait to see the detail.

[Init]

Really nice, gj :D

[Meti]

Really nice work there :)

[Boonzeet]

Use a dark color for the outlines, not black.

Also, the pillowshading on those poles is appaling.

[hoozy.02]

Use a dark color for the outlines, not black.

Also, the pillowshading on those poles is appaling.

Oh yeah, thanks for pointing those poles out. They weren't like that to start with, but I think I flipped them to make the outlines symetrical and forgot to change the shading back.

[hoozy.02]

Really sorry about the double post, but I couldn't edit my above post.

I just thought the black lines would make it look more Habbo-like, seeing as all the hotel veiws and stuff only use black outlines.