[BIO] Le Club Moderne.

[jackass]

Final edition.

I actually made this alt a few months ago, i've decided to fix a few errors, add better shading, i've also added the staff guy and i've changed a few colours. I hope you like it - its my favourite alt anyway! Elites maybe? (Seeing as some of my worst alts are in elites, I don't see why this shouldn't! :8)

http://www.iaza.com/work/080527C/layout64final9183862148-iaza.gif

[Swearwolf]

10/10 i love the staff guy :)
elites yes please

[Malcolms]

10/10 Well done! Maybe add some more seats?

[OhLiam]

'wow' this looks awsome.

one word.. ELITES!

[Browney]

Bio, bio, bio. Just for suggesting Elites I'm not gonna say elites. I'm ashamed. That really puts me off.

Here we go:
- Plant pots look wafer thin. Give them some thickness.
- The table tennis table uses part of someone else's alt so I think you should change that before it reaches elites.
- Are the sofas recolours? I dont think any alt that has recolours in deserves elites. Sorry.

The worker is just that alt you made ages ago right? You changed the habbo "parent" to a bloke, but forgot to edit out the boobs so we all found it tad hilarious.

It is good, really good, theres just little niggly bits, I feel.

[Redacted]

Nice work, although I agree with Adam.

[jackass]

Bio, bio, bio. Just for suggesting Elites I'm not gonna say elites. I'm ashamed. That really puts me off.

Here we go:
- Plant pots look wafer thin. Give them some thickness.
- The table tennis table uses part of someone else's alt so I think you should change that before it reaches elites.
- Are the sofas recolours? I dont thik any alt that has recolours in deserves elites. Sorry.

The worker is just that alt you made ages ago right? You changed the habbo "parent" to a bloke, but forgot to edit out the boobs so we all found it tad hilarious.

I don't think you read it correctly (or I might have set it out correctly), but I meant it in a way to replace my other alts in elites, because my older, more crappy ones defiantly shouldn't be there.

1) Plant pots, okay, i'll sort that out.
2) As i've said previously, I had permission off the guys msn around about a year and a half ago.
3) Completely incorrect. Check almost every elite and almost every elite has a recolour. And its not just a recolour - its more of a revamp.

And for the last statement, its always been a guy, and i'm not even sure what the 'habbo parent' is. Link?

You don't seem to be in the best of moods, but feel free to keep posting critism and i'll keep throwing it back. ;)

[Spiffing]

Its really good, except the room looks a bit bare =S
Not elites yet but if you improved it, well who knows ;) x

[Browney]

I don't think you read it correctly (or I might have set it out correctly), but I meant it in a way to replace my other alts in elites, because my older, more crappy ones defiantly shouldn't be there.

Well that's fair enough, It just annoys me a tad when people say "Elites?" If it was elites standard people wouldn't need to be prompted to say it.


1) Plant pots, okay, i'll sort that out.
2) As i've said previously, I had permission off the guys msn around about a year and a half ago.

Ah, I think you might have mis-understood me, I don't mean it's ripped without permission, it's just if something is going to go into elites I think it should ALL be one person's work. Might be a tad pathetic from me, but it cant take much longer than 2 minutes to recolour the base can it?


3) Completely incorrect. Check almost every elite and almost every elite has a recolour. And its not just a recolour - its more of a revamp.

I never stated anything as fact. I never said "all elites have no recolours" I just said that I think elites shouldn't have recolours.


And for the last statement, its always been a guy, and i'm not even sure what the 'habbo parent' is. Link?

For some reason the search tool isn't being a very happy bunny so I'll have to look around. AHA! I have found it, it was on elites. If you click here (http://www.habbox.com/site//component/option,com_zoom/Itemid,251/page,view/catid,20/PageNo,1/key,64/hit,1/) you can see it. And here:

http://i28.tinypic.com/142925y.png

Notice the facial hair and the bosom. :P Not laughing at you, by any means. I'm laughing with you. You have to admit, to have a he-she on elites is a big acheivement. ;)

[jackass]

Well that's fair enough, It just annoys me a tad when people say "Elites?" If it was elites standard people wouldn't need to be prompted to say it.



Ah, I think you might have mis-understood me, I don't mean it's ripped without permission, it's just if something is going to go into elites I think it should ALL be one person's work. Might be a tad pathetic from me, but it cant take much longer than 2 minutes to recolour the base can it?



I never stated anything as fact. I never said "all elites have no recolours" I just said that I think elites shouldn't have recolours.



For some reason the search tool isn't being a very happy bunny so I'll have to look around. AHA! I have found it, it was on elites. If you click here (http://www.habbox.com/site//component/option,com_zoom/Itemid,251/page,view/catid,20/PageNo,1/key,64/hit,1/) you can see it. And here:

http://i28.tinypic.com/142925y.png

Notice the facial hair and the bosom. :P Not laughing at you, by any means. I'm laughing with you. You have to admit, to have a he-she on elites is a big acheivement. ;)

You take elites pretty seriously, don't you? :P

Fair enough, I do agree with a lot of your comments. But about the table tennis, its not really a recolour of an alt, its heavily edited, as with the sofa's. Besides, the table tennis and sofa's are some of the main parts - I can't remove them! ;)

And yeah, I know I posted it before - but it has never been a woman, that was an alt of another man, and the one in this thread is an alt of that man. Its been changed quite frequently really.

Thanks dude! :8

[Browney]

You take elites pretty seriously, don't you? :P

Fair enough, I do agree with a lot of your comments. But about the table tennis, its not really a recolour of an alt, its heavily edited, as with the sofa's. Besides, the table tennis and sofa's are some of the main parts - I can't remove them! ;)

And yeah, I know I posted it before - but it has never been a woman, that was an alt of another man, and the one in this thread is an alt of that man. Its been changed quite frequently really.

Thanks dude! :8

Well yeah seen as I never got one. (:eusa_booh)

I see what you mean with the sofas and the table. Ah fair enough, good luck with elites anyway. But I warn you now, another alt of yours goes to elites and I'll- I'll-... well I dunno what I'll do but it wont be pretty.

[jackass]

Well yeah seen as I never got one. (:eusa_booh)

I see what you mean with the sofas and the table. Ah fair enough, good luck with elites anyway. But I warn you now, another alt of yours goes to elites and I'll- I'll-... well I dunno what I'll do but it wont be pretty.

For some reason, almost all of my alts get through to elites - but they aren't even good!

Adam, join the public pixel artist group and request yours for elites, because they will add them - your alts are amazing mate!

Thanks for the good luck! :P

[Frizzoo]

I think it is very good, but elites? hmm maybe, maybe not.. but i think overall it is very good :)

[Boonzeet]

No, not elites. It isn't detailed enough. Anyway, I guess you should credit siz for his computers.

[jackass]

No, not elites. It isn't detailed enough. Anyway, I guess you should credit siz for his computers.

Don't think so. If you check with him, I think you'll find that I did them first back in the 'tidy' collection that wasn't released due to him posting first.

[Con]

Its really good!

Im not sure if its elites tho..
It doesn't really say "AMAINZG ELITES" !!!!111 one one one

[Shawnstra]

You need to add depth to the flower boxes, other than that elites!

[StickMan]

Very nice, I just don't like the poster... looks weird.

Dan/

[-AzX]

Its good, it just doesnt seem elite to me, kinda because most of it seems like edited stuff from habbo.

However if you made your own original stuff to add to it, it maybe could be elite.

[PaintYourTarget]

The plant boxes lack depth and thickness, or atleast add shadows underneath the plants to show they are falling over the top.
Also, with the bottom lights there should be a new lightsource on some of the walls and bars, with them having atleast some light on them gradiating (I think I just made that word out) back to the original colour.
The plant pots and bars could also do with a highlight instead of the black/brown lines on the edges.
I intensely dislike the man, in my opinion it looks too thin and like it's just been placed there to show it off instead of actually working it into the scene of the room.
I think I also see a pixel error in the blinds.

I think you need to add more people to the room, to make it look like it's actually a real Habbo room and not one just to show it's an alteration. All of Roboevil's, Lynns., Soyers', CryingAngel's etc work had Habbos interacting with the alteration and it just, in my opinion, makes it look more finished and professional.

[Nuka-Cola]

As last time very good the guy doesnt really fit in as everything is very simplistic and white or wood and hes there in a casual trousers and a jacket

[jackass]

Its good, it just doesnt seem elite to me, kinda because most of it seems like edited stuff from habbo.

However if you made your own original stuff to add to it, it maybe could be elite.

I drew the walls, desk, projector, lights etc. from scratch? :S


The plant boxes lack depth and thickness, or atleast add shadows underneath the plants to show they are falling over the top.
Also, with the bottom lights there should be a new lightsource on some of the walls and bars, with them having atleast some light on them gradiating (I think I just made that word out) back to the original colour.
The plant pots and bars could also do with a highlight instead of the black/brown lines on the edges.
I intensely dislike the man, in my opinion it looks too thin and like it's just been placed there to show it off instead of actually working it into the scene of the room.
I think I also see a pixel error in the blinds.

I think you need to add more people to the room, to make it look like it's actually a real Habbo room and not one just to show it's an alteration. All of Roboevil's, Lynns., Soyers', CryingAngel's etc work had Habbos interacting with the alteration and it just, in my opinion, makes it look more finished and professional.

Alright, thanks for the advice. :)

I did add lots of people in previous versions, but it made it look VERY tacky. ;)

[jackass]

I cannot edit.

I'm closing this thread. I'm doing another final version of this alt, using all your advice from this thread. Look around for it over the next few days.

Thanks! Thread closed. :)