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Coldplay
28-05-2008, 11:29 PM
A poem which I wrote to describe my situation at the moment, emotionally speaking.


'Confusion'

Locked inside, not hard to see
the things that you're doing to me
I think of you all the time, your always there
it's getting to much for me to bear

Easy for them to say "get over it"
but they dont know I feel like ****
they don't know how I'm feeling
inside my chest, my heart is reeling

I love you now, the same as ever
my philosophy, never say never.
yet everybody says, no second chances
and still I make these forward advances?

I really need to get over you
so what is there that I can do?
because all this talk of getting back together
makes me love you more than ever

I can't move on, but I can't stay here
why cant I accept, the end is near
why don't I see, past your facade
I just need these feelings to fade ...Feedback? If this is in the wrong place Sorry, didn't know where to put it.

Bottom line on my relationship is I love this girl, I went out with her for 4 months, 3 weeks ago we split up, she got with someone else, she cheated on them with me, shes still with him, there may be the possibility of us getting back together.

Stevehere
29-05-2008, 12:06 AM
theres a poem subforum you know :P

overall its really good

heres poem about my life

"CRAP"
by Steve

Coldplay
29-05-2008, 12:09 AM
Lol, I found it and posted it, Thanks.

Lol at your poem.

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