My Modern Range

[Luke]

Well, done these a while ago and can be bothered to upload them today.

This is my 4th alt, so don't be to hard please.

Thanks
Luke

http://www.tehupload.com/images/1095211783448modern.png
http://www.tehupload.com/images/1095211783448modern.png

http://www.tehupload.com/images/604508693830modern_room.png
http://www.tehupload.com/images/604508693830modern_room.png

[Boonzeet]

Apart from the fact that they don't obey physics in any way shape or form, They are so and so.

31/2/10

[PaintYourTarget]

I don't know if it's my screen or not, but you've gone way too light on the highlights - though, kudos for including them.
It looks all pretty good, just need to get the lightsource and shades and that fixed and your done dude.

[hoozy.02]

Nice basic shape and wood design, but the shading leaves a lot to be desired.

[Yux]

they don't obey physics in any way shape or form

How so?

[Meti]

I'm sorry, but i don't like them at all. Looks like re-colours of glass furnitures.

[Kyle]

The backs are too flat

;)

[Finkelstien]

Could do with a lot more work.

5/10 for effort though, keep at it :).

[Dusty-09]

I think it needs more work, I see pixel errors as well 4/10.

[Con]

IMO
It looks like the start of a pretty decent alt.

Yet, You seem to say its finished.

Most of the above posts cover what i was thinking anyway.

1) Some pixel errors in places,
2) The backs of the chairs are too flat
3) You should recolour the Green cushions on the chairs
4) Add more colour from the floor to the actual furni range.

[Luke]

well, as i said, it's only my 4th alt.

i'll try sort out what you said later xD

Thanks for comments

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[Boonzeet]

How so?


IMO
2) The backs of the chairs are too flat


The backs are too flat

The backs connect oddly to the arms, too. They don't obey physics, the highlights imply depth which isn't backed up by the structure.

[-AzX]

Remember guys, its his fourth alt, be nice.

I know buttering up posts doesn't help, but neither does being harsh when
for a 4th attempt that isnt half bad.

OT:

You need to work on your shading and make the chairs look more 3d,
apart from that, its not bad for a 4th alt wd.

[Livv]

need shading