Arithmatic of Life =D

[Tommy]

Anyone like my poem?

Took a while to write =D I finished it ages ago, but ive finally posted it on here =D
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Arithmatic of life

You're trying to subtract from your pain
And add to your pleasure
Multiply the good time
And divide your time between the latest fads
And in it all somehow
I get left out of the equation

It doesn't matter what you gain
If a life lived for me isn't the sum
If you subtract me from the equation
Your life just won't add up
So put it all together
Check it twice
This is the arithmetic of your life

[jinxii]

Whoa, that's really abstract. Kinda deep as well. Good work. =)

[Tommy]

Haraa a reply =P

-Waits for another-

[Ferccia]

Wow, really deep and alot
of meaning to it :) Wd =]

[Charizard.]

Whoa, Niceee. I like Poems that are deep, And especially this one, very nice, I like how its done like maths. Even though I hate maths. ;D

[Tommy]

Yes that makes sense... o.O