Tell me what you think so far.

[Shadowrock!]

=D please tell me what you think of this so far

its a rooftop skate park atm

here it is

marks out of 10 so far please

=)
http://img282.echo.cx/img282/5959/habborooftops0mt.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

[Y!]

Very nice you might want to add glass to the windows though, I can see it's still not finished, very good so far.

[Shadowrock!]

yes ive just used the glass as sort of a prop, to get the other things done lol

[Ferccia]

Wow! Thats really good so far :)
It seems like you've worked really hard on it! :-]
Well done, it looks very good so far! :D

[Kaya]

For some reason, it doesnt look right to me

[Steven]

it's nice well done.

[Shadowrock!]

thanks kaya =\ you could atleast say why please

[Kaya]

thanks kaya =\ you could atleast say why please

The writing isnt right.
All the rooms are the same colour! :O
The ladder isnt insometric.
I think the door is too small for a habbo.
The window cross is not in the middle.

Sorry, if I was being harsh. But its the truth atleast

[iNicks]

Everything she said and the building looks like paper, the window crosses on some of them are blue.

Floor has the squares but then they dissapear. And also there are a lot of pixel errors. But i still like the idea and cant wait to see the finished

[Kaya]

AND! use other colours. Not normal paint colours

[Punk Rebel Kris]

The people could fall off and DIE!

[Dudeitsme]

kaya you have no idea what your talking about the ladder is isometric and why would every room be a different color its not a house the writeing is supose to be that way do to if he wanted it to look better he would make the writeing look better

p.s. nice alt shadow

[the wombats]

come on, he could be editing all that, and what dudeitsme said is true, its not finished yet

[!:Joe:!]

I like it very nice, but I think you should get rid of the bit that says shadow and put something else like a sports logo or something... It would make it a bit better and the glass, but apart from that 8.5/10 :)Keep up the good work

[Mr.pixels]

I like it, infact love it
on some bits you didnt use the text tool
tut tut*
Keep it up and you maybe elites

[ReTaken]

Looking God , Could Improve The Shadow :D Lmao @ Punk They Might Fall off And DIE! , Make Railings Or Sumthing?

[nets]

The dark lines on the inside of the box, you could try making them lighter (A dark brown). ;p

[RLY-CRAIG?]

I really live it! Espically the windows where you can see in and the different colours! I love the ladders as well!

Nice work :p

[Joe.]

very nice :D 9/10

[Shadowrock!]

i did use other colours!!! theres dark greys, light greys, different shades of everything

its just your eyes that are the problem!

[Cheeseboy76]

Wow that's good as always shadow :D 10/10 Love it :D And the half-pipe is cool :D I'm a wannabe skater :p
Edit: Reminds me of Tony Hawks Underground on the Hawaii level

[Shadowrock!]

yes lol, thats what inspired me. as i just bought THUG 2
and i know alot of people have made skate alts, but i wanted to make a "improved"
version

[nets]

ARGH. You didnt listen to me ;'[
Any way, lighten the lines and shade them like this:

[Shadowrock!]

i know nets, i havent changed it yet lol xD

this is only a starter

[ReTaken]

i did use other colours!!! theres dark greys, light greys, different shades of everything

its just your eyes that are the problem!

Lol well said , get her told :D:D

[Krypsis]

I hate skating but i like this alt 8.9/10

[Redmoon Evil]

i notice the ladders stepps whateva are not consistant other than that its all good just need shading, but what happens if your a novice and cant scate well du i fall?

[Shadowrock!]

YOU DONT GO ON IT

lol
jeez use some commen sence people xD

if you was a novice in real life, would u try skating there?

no, of course not. but bam margera skates on roofs, so i dont see what all these questions about dying are all about, cuz all you need is commen sence lol

[Redmoon Evil]

common sence tells me if its there i wanah play on it

[Luayminator]

I would fall off and die. But its great. Except for the thing that says shadow, thats just nasteh

[GoldenGrahams]

Great alt. A lot of effort's gone in there, but take Nets' shading advice before I rep you ;P

As for Kaya - Stop talking out of your ar*e. Think before you talk in future, idiot. -.-

[Shadowrock!]

thanks, and yes im going to take it. but at the moment im not working on it, but yes nets and bradzo and everyone else, i will take his advice.

[lucyecc]

very nice so far :)

tell him what sort of other stuff he could add :D

[GoldenGrahams]

Railings to stop helpless skaters being transformed into strawberry pancakes...

[Azza]

the writing is bit wobbley. shapes seem bit off but ecept that gr8.
8.5/10

[Noble]

Not that bad, the text on like the ramp or whatever needs to be more isometric. 8/10.

[GommeInc]

I think it is coming on quite well. JUst need to make the building more thicker around the windows and maybe think of a different colour?

[.Amberz.]

:) Thats very good so far, keep it up.

[stonesey]

hmmm.. its ok but i think it'll probably lok better with more shading and maybe with habbo's in it? it might look better like that