Review my video promo!

[IDontKnow]

Hey Guys,

Can you all please review my video promotion for my charity gig -

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lNgq_EnQoXQ

Kindest Regards

[Invent]

Far too boring.

You need to add more to it to make it stand out and keep people watching.

[Misawa]

Windows Movie Maker. Grossly-overused effects. No thank you.