Subway [WIP]

[-Evilpenguin-]

This is still a work in progress yet i decided to get a general opinion on it and some advice before continuing.

Points i think i need to improve are firstly the windows, and too add a bit more life to the station.

Anyway what are your views?

http://www.tehupload.com/images/760292938413you.jpg

Edit: Sorry guys i forgot to save as a PNG, so basicly going to have to start from scratch again, ahhhhh fun lol

[Moh]

The size of the train is a bit too small. A Habbo wouldn't be able to fit on the seats :P

[Boonzeet]

Well um. Have fun trying to carry on working on it! Because it's now beyond repair :(

It needs more shading from what I can work out behind the subway :)

[shizzle]

Its too black, make the floors light grey, the train needs to look as if it is moving, and the shading needs to be done.

[Mint]

Very cool but does look a little basic, maybe if you updated it a bit more...:)

[Ace-Corn]

This is good. But everything can/needs to be improved.
Heres the bad points:
Windows does not reflect
Seats too small
Dont save as jpeg! Its made for photos! SAVE AS PNG!
Its way too black. More colours! Take a look at your own subways!
More people! Both inside and outside subway train.
You need smooth lines! Dont make everything like a box!

Good points:
Very good concept.
Looks like it can be funny to watch when its done.

[Cajak]

First of all make the subway larger. Also try to make the station larger and more decorated (dunno, add an advertising panel, or a bench).
Try also to develop the subway itself: windows reflection, a cool colour (if you ever saw London or Paris subways, they're not just white). If you want to keep the subway "shiny", try to make it in metal. That would be cool. :P

[Nereo]

Its looking good I think :)

[Con]

Basically what others have said,
Its a bit small
And you definately need ALOT of shading on this - Also make the actuall carriage longer,
And maybe make the train track thing a bit lower down otherwise you have to step UP to get onto it.

Goodluck with starting again :P

[luce]

Thats ok the tube is a little square

but its ok well done :)

[marriott0.01]

The carriages are square but it's okay :)

[TitaniumRubber]

Great idea!, i have nothing nice left to say now :D

[theman0001]

Make the train bigger (to do this you will probly need to do a bigger room)
make a platform!!!
add adverts
Its good though and must have taken lots of time.:)

[-Evilpenguin-]

hehe, i think this has been advised to death now :p, Thanks for your opinions i do definitely need to work on this so hopefully i can create a v2 thats better.

P.S and save it as a png :P hehe