ATM / Cash Machine

[-whiteflame-]

i've been wanting to try this for a while now and this is what i have come up with. i am really not happy with it. i was hoping that someone could edit it and send it to me so that i can learn from the changes made.

ok i just did this with an updated 1 on it as well as the original. pls give more tips from here. thanks :)

http://img218.echo.cx/img218/504/habxcash8wx.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

[clearmint]

8.5/10 few pixel errors +rep :D

[Krypsis]

Very nice Dan, your getting good at these alts lol 8.9/10

[iRoss]

Don't you think it would be rather hard to see the screen ?!

[-whiteflame-]

i've got a long way to go before im classed as "good". but i'll get there, after all, i've got nothing better to do. :p

[GoldenGrahams]

It's a very well designed alt, though it just looks a bit odd.

Can't quite pick out what it is.

I just think it's something wrong with the screen.
I thought they were on a flat base.
I'm no pro on alts myself, but try googling a few images of ATMs.

http://www2.warwick.ac.uk/fac/soc/wie/NEOTHEMI/About/FinanceAware/atm2.jpg

[Exelglug]

thats ok i think good job :) 8/10

[ReTaken]

Good :D It Would be Better If Flat

[nets]

i was hoping that someone could edit it and send it to me so that i can learn from the changes made
Just some quick changes, I didnt add much detail though.

[CrystalChime]

ooh they are good :D 9/10

[-whiteflame-]

Just some quick changes, I didnt add much detail though.


thanks very much. it helps a lot :)

i think i tend to use too much black. so hopefully my next alt will be much better.

[Ferccia]

Wow! Thats amazing!! :)
Your very good at making alts =] I love
the details there great! :D 9/10 Wd :)

[nets]

Np, just remember to allways try and make the lines on the inside not black ;p

[Roboevil]

They look like they could do with alot of shading.

[Azza]

very smart indeed. 9/10 + rep though :p

[JoeyK.]

Fair, but maybe it would look better if it wasn't part of the wall? 8/10 nice work ;)

[-whiteflame-]

Fair, but maybe it would look better if it wasn't part of the wall? 8/10 nice work ;)


eek. of all my alts, you decide that this is the 1 to dig up. lol

after the help from this alt i actually managed a half decent alt and am working on something pretty nice at the moment. ;)

[=Jen=]

Wow, 9/10 +rep.

[Metric.]

Great! 10/10 I like the first one bestest! xD what a word!

[Camy]

I think that would be a great idea it could be like splash plastic but you use the home phone to put credits on your account then when you need them go to the ATM and put in ur pin number. :) Great idea 10/10

[Noble]

Hmm - I like it, well done. 9/10.

[Punk Rock Star]

WOW COOL 10/10 +rep