[Don] House

[CadalacDon]

http://i29.tinypic.com/nzneci.jpg
Ok so im starting to post more of my alts here so here ya go :).
Door is made by Lynn cause I couldn't make a better door :P

[reeana]

Wow! Thats great! +rep!

[luce]

Thats quite cool well done ;)

[Cajak]

Hmmm... first of all, your house is excellent. :eusa_clap
Second, try to put tiles on the roof. It'll probably look more detailed. :)

[lPinoy]

Thats pretty darn good :)

Well done<3

[Kotu]

Looks great.

If you're up for a challenge the next step would be to add some texture to the roof and the walls - a few cracks, bricks/wood work and tiles :D

[brodeo]

The rim of the roof doesn't appear to be shaded correctly.
Also on the nearest side of the roof it ends like | but on the furthest side of the roof it ends like \
A good start though :)

Oh just picked up another. All sides of the fence seem to be the same colour or of very little distinguishable difference, you should maybe thing about changing that.

[flatface]

Not bad, infact pretty good =] +rep

[Helpo]

Like Zomg.!

Hi sean. :D
And I know, ur art is amazin!
++reppers

[Monopoly]

The floor in the windows is a little odd.
appart from that it's really fantastic. :D

[Nuka-Cola]

two things i noticed

1. the red line shows that that is where your wall should start within your window. Just something i realised. thats if you want to make it more realistic

2. there is a stray pixel ( in the red circle ) of black that i noticed in the grass

apart from that ... awsome + rep

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/9423/donhousekr8.png (http://imageshack.us)

[dbgtz]

the bin was made by habbo? good nether the less.

[Casio]

Very good as other people have said just try to add texture etc now and that will make i perfect 8/10
-Nikki

[lAscend]

That looks pretty impressive there nice work :)

[Con]

Looks great.

If you're up for a challenge the next step would be to add some texture to the roof and the walls - a few cracks, bricks/wood work and tiles :D
I agree thats the next step


http://i29.tinypic.com/nzneci.jpg
Ok so im starting to post more of my alts here so here ya go :).
Door is made by Lynn cause I couldn't make a better door :P
Ok, You forgot to add a wall inside the house, Through the window.
Unless they are not all one building then you need to sort out the roof as its not in-line with the garage.
Follow what everyone else has said as well and I'm sure it will become even better

[,Jess,]

That looks really good :) +Rep

[H0BJ0B]

It's good but...

The blinds are the same colour as the floor which isn't really too good.
The arial doesn't look too realistic.

[CadalacDon]

It's good but...

The blinds are the same colour as the floor which isn't really too good.
The arial doesn't look too realistic.I didnt make blinds in the house?

[mr.parasols]

Join the roof in the centre, and add some more textures and alot more detail! Nice start though, has alot of potential.

[Villain]

the bin was made by habbo? good nether the less.

Noticed that. Anyway, nice work.

[Meti]

OMG!! That's amazing. +REPP

[shizzle]

It's good, nice alt.

[iUnknown]

It's really good but not quite elite.

[Samantha.]

I Like It :] Well Done ;]

[Cursory]

Aww thats pretty good :) Back of the garage roof is a little slanted though, if that makes sense?

9/10 ;)

[CadalacDon]

Aww thats pretty good :) Back of the garage roof is a little slanted though, if that makes sense?

9/10 ;)
I made it that way :)

[Cherri]

Nice!
10/10!

Dont I know you from habbo.com?

Lol!

You're May's friend ^^

[CadalacDon]

Nice!
10/10!

Dont I know you from habbo.com?

Lol!

You're May's friend ^^Yep, didnt I meet you in some football stadium?

[GhostFace-]

i love it.

[TitaniumRubber]

two things i noticed

1. the red line shows that that is where your wall should start within your window. Just something i realised. thats if you want to make it more realistic

2. there is a stray pixel ( in the red circle ) of black that i noticed in the grass

apart from that ... awsome + rep

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/9423/donhousekr8.png (http://imageshack.us)


same with the other window and garage partition, also the roofs dont merge correctly

[Nippeh]

Excellent work, be nice if, like the comment above, the wall was adjusted to suit :P

+rep