Scary Story

[Mint]

Two girls went on holiday and where sharing a room with eachover, when they got there one of them was really tired from the plane and decided to go to sleep and it was 10pm at night anyway. The other wanted to go to the hotel libary to get some books to read for the next day. So she went down and left her friend to go to sleep. When she finally got to the libary she had realised that she had forgotten her libary card so went back up to get it, she didn't turn the lights on so she wouldn't wake her friend up. She had a rough idea where abouts the card was so went round the room feeling for it and got it. So she went back down to the libary and fell asleep while reading a book. She went back to the hotel in the morning and saw her friend dead on the bed with blood everwhere and on the wall there was some writing, it said "Bet your glad you didn't turn the lights on".

I wrote that myself based on the well known story as I think this one sounds better.

[Malachy]

that's really good. didn't think it would have that sort of ending
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[Plux]

That could expand, but I doubt it's yours.

[Mint]

There are many editions of this story that people have made, But I wrote it all out based on the story.

[Monopoly]

Even if it's not yours it sent a bit of a chill down my spine. :)

[Mint]

A girl told it us in college and I searched it up on the web and found many editions of it but I made my own cos I think it is better.

[Plux]

Plagarism.

[lPinoy]

Even if it wasnt yours, yeah... sent me shivering.

[Callum.]

can you post the real one / the one that you took it from?

sounds pretty cool. although i've never been to a hotel where they give you library cards for books.

[e5]

wow lol, that actually made me like :O

nice :P

[mike475]

best short story ever
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[Mint]

I will try to find the proper one for you all :). It's called an urban legend, theres loads of them.

[Plux]

You didn't write this one though

[Shinigami]

more like this here http://urbanlegends.about.com/od/horrors/a/turn_on_light.htm

[Ugawa]

oo that end bit gave me goose bumps

XX

[splatttt]

ive seen this around myspace before lol
i swearr.

[Mint]

I love it still! :D

[Plux]

I love it still! :D


Where'd you steal it from though?

[Mint]

I heard someone I know telling it us so I thought I would try to find the full version, and I did. But then I shortened it and told my version which I think is better. :)

Where'd you steal it from though?

[Nemo]

I heard someone I know telling it us so I thought I would try to find the full version, and I did. But then I shortened it and told my version which I think is better. :)
yes yes, we all know you think yours is better:rolleyes:

[Joshuae]

I heard someone I know telling it us so I thought I would try to find the full version, and I did. But then I shortened it and told my version which I think is better. :)

You copied & pasted.

[Mint]

Where'd you steal it from though?

You copied & pasted.
I'll take them as compliments, if you think I copyed and pasted it, it must be good and I didn't. :)

yes yes, we all know you think yours is better:rolleyes:
Yeh I was just explaining to him because he wouldn't understand. ;)

[Javascrypt]

Two girls went on holiday and where sharing a room with eachover, when they got there one of them was really tired from the plane and decided to go to sleep and it was 10pm at night anyway. The other wanted to go to the hotel libary to get some books to read for the next day. So she went down and left her friend to go to sleep. When she finally got to the libary she had realised that she had forgotten her libary card so went back up to get it, she didn't turn the lights on so she wouldn't wake her friend up. She had a rough idea where abouts the card was so went round the room feeling for it and got it. So she went back down to the libary and fell asleep while reading a book. She went back to the hotel in the morning and saw her friend dead on the bed with blood everwhere and on the wall there was some writing, it said "Bet your glad you didn't turn the lights on".

I wrote that myself based on the well known story as I think this one sounds better.

Heard it before, my spanish sub told me that one

[Mint]

Heard it before, my spanish sub told me that one
I do believe that it is a quite well known story. :)