My firat doll alt

[deltateamaplha]

I wanted to start of with something simple.... I know there may be some errors but i TRYED...:Phttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v497/yazzithomson/untitled.png

[!star--girl!]

that isn't a doll

[deltateamaplha]

well I ment sorta like an alt to the habbo :eusa_sick

[!star--girl!]

why is the title: 'My firat doll alt' then?

[Jasmin]

Give her a break for god's sake,
[haha it rhymes,!]
anyway I fixed up some lose black lines, and remeber The darkest colour for the top and the shading and then floodfill it in with the lightest colour, and next time maybe show the whole body :D Hope ive helped,

http://img239.echo.cx/img239/6954/improvement3hb.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

Ive circled the red bits that had pixel errors, or something was a lil wrong, dont take it personally =]Ok Hun x

[kasi]

thats not a doll :P

but i guess its ok

6/10 if its your first alt
5/10 if its not

[Kekea]

Uhm.... 5/10