My First ever none habbo layout

[Gangster]

Hey guys, this si my first ever non habbo layout, so it looks a little habboey.

Rate and Slate please.

And also, how can i improve

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2202/mergedgx5.png (http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/586/mergedpc2.png)
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2202/mergedgx5.png

[iUnknown]

Sorry but I can certainly tell it's your first ever non-habbo layout.

The top isn't at all in a habbo style, but then the boxes do look a bit basic and you've used a habbo font for them.

I can't say the boxes are in a habbo style but, it's often the style habbo fansites use... just a plain box in paint...

Then the footer is using a sort of habbo look, yet again, it doesn't include anything like a habbo feature so I can't say it is habbo themed but it is the kind of thing used a lot on habbo layouts.

Try and use more gradients and get better inspiration :)

[Meti]

as Guy said. The top of the layout doesn't look like a habbo layout. But... Below the top, it looks like a habbo layout :)

[Jahova]

It's not the worst but it's far from being the best.
I think it needs more colour and a decent background?

[myke]

It's ok, but try and steer clear from using Habbo fonts.

Also, there's random blurrs and pencil marks all over it..

[wsg14]

As people have said, the header looks fine but the boxes look way too habbo-ish. Give them some effects, such *** gradients, drop shadows, glows etc. Also stear clear of Volter Goldfish (that's a big indicator of Habbo)

The footer has that 'Habbo' effect to it. It's because of that gradient. Try to experiment with brushes etc. You'll come up with something good. :) Otherwise, it's an okay layout.

[Gangster]

Im making a new one, an im gonna take my time on this one.

[Gangster]

Soz, can't edit, but here's some of the new one i created, shall i carry on? or scrap it and make a newer one?

http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/2752/notfinishedcopyym5.png

[Meti]

About this layout above my post.. Scrap it.

[myke]

I like the new-er one, it's definitely an improvement :)

[wsg14]

Take the content box from your new layout and add it to the other layout you made.

http://www.omgupload.com/files/3342tst.png
http://www.omgupload.com/files/3342tst.png

That sort of thing, then do something with the footer and it should look pretty good.