Mario (Mario Series)

[reeana]

I know it isn't the best but I tried. Moustache needs a bit of fixing up - I know. :) Just give me some constructive -cough-NICE-cough- criticism :P Oh and tell me if I've improved at all from my other alts I've done...
http://www.iaza.com/work/080727C/Mario4451127440-iaza.gif

[Meti]

I like it, but most of the places are very "pixely"

[SugarBabyRach]

Im unsure, looks unfinished on the blue suit, nice alt anyway [:

[Con]

It's quite a simple character alt to do but,
Maybe try creating your own boots to go with the rest of the outift,
Re-do the moustache so it doesn't looks like you drew it face on and stuck it on him,
The side "closest to the screen" needs to be slightly longer then the side "furthest away" thus giving the impression it is isometric + actually on his face.

Again, You need to make the M on his hat a bit more isometric, Perhaps use a more grey tone for the white circle on the hat?

If you do this, I'm sure it will look pretty awesome.
His clothes (minus hat + shoes) Look pretty good.



I know it isn't the best but I tried. Moustache needs a bit of fixing up - I know. :) Just give me some constructive -cough-NICE-cough- criticism :P Oh and tell me if I've improved at all from my other alts I've done...
http://www.iaza.com/work/080727C/Mario4451127440-iaza.gif















I thought that's how it is supposed to be?
Just plain blue overalls.
I suppose she could add a pocket but I'm not sure Mario has one?:S


Im unsure, looks unfinished on the blue suit, nice alt anyway [:

[luce]

He looks to much like a habbo to be mario if you get what i mean :)

[lPinoy]

Thats pretty good, wd.

[DJ::Beatz]

Very nice ;)
I like this one better than your Daisy one (no offence)

[Camy]

He needs to be smaller and fatter for a start.

[Scarcely]

At first I thought it was a coke character...
It's a nice simple design...
7/10

[ExtraKen]

Rite. Its looking nice qua shaping and colours. Althou I can give you some tips to improve it.

First of all try to shade the area on belly more and arms. Try to use not so bright colours cause than an alt will have a complete differant look than when you use darker colours.
http://www.iaza.com/work/080727C/Mario4451127440-iaza.gif http://uploadpicz.com/images/HV8HLCT.png
yours ----mine

Can you see how a bit darker colours can give a complete differant look to an alt.

So in the future try to shade your alts more and find good matching colours.

If you ever need help ;) you can always pm me.

[luce]

Rite. Its looking nice qua shaping and colours. Althou I can give you some tips to improve it.

First of all try to shade the area on belly more and arms. Try to use not so bright colours cause than an alt will have a complete differant look than when you use darker colours.
http://www.iaza.com/work/080727C/Mario4451127440-iaza.gif http://uploadpicz.com/images/HV8HLCT.png
yours ----mine

Can you see how a bit darker colours can give a complete differant look to an alt.

So in the future try to shade your alts more and find good matching colours.

If you ever need help ;) you can always pm me.

That's a big improvement in a few simple touches. practice makes perfect though i expect to see more from you soon! :) PM when you do or something ;)

[,Rachyy,]

It's very nice!

6/10 :)

[DPS]

Reeee Reeeeeeeee <3

7/10

[reeana]

:O Its Jordan. xD

Thanks Ken. I'll take that into consideration when I next do an alt. xD

[ExtraKen]

:O Its Jordan. xD

Thanks Ken. I'll take that into consideration when I next do an alt. xD

I hope you do ;)