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jinxii
25-06-2005, 08:30 PM
Note: One word was filtered, so I've avoided the filter, but I figure this is okay as it's not used in an offensive way.


To Be Titled


Surround the truth that'll kill you with a bodyguard of lies;
Ignorance is bliss, and what a better time to learn that as a guise
For the painful truth, dishonesty is not to be despised.
Shield yourself from happenings sweet-smelling but barbed,
Lest you forget that good intentions often harbour
Buried will to stab you at the most vulnerable and off your guard.

It is better to know you know nothing at all,
Than to know you know something - but remember that no matter how small
A warm grain of hope may be,
It'll cr*ack open your frozen heart of battered hearts
And, caring not for flesh or soul, will unlock and free
All your hopes and dreams, desires and fears,
And bid them make their way as bitter, salted tears.

MYKE!
25-06-2005, 08:31 PM
excelent :)

10000000000000000000/10

+rep

;)

Ferccia
25-06-2005, 08:32 PM
Wow! Thats brilliant :)
10/10 Wd Jinxii!!

-=rooty987=-
25-06-2005, 08:42 PM
I really like it 10/10

jinxii
26-06-2005, 12:59 PM
Awww...thank you. =) Any ideas for titles?

MYKE!
26-06-2005, 01:00 PM
erm....emily's emo poem? :p

kasi
26-06-2005, 02:53 PM
Wow it's great ;D

10/10

jinxii
28-06-2005, 03:57 PM
'Emily's Emo Poem' isn't quite as poignant and moving as I'd have hoped! :P

Thank you v. much for kind ratings and rep.

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