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=Jen=
26-06-2005, 09:57 PM
Aloneness




I lay here in my bed,
writing this poem,
I look on my thigh,
give a sigh,
and I dunno why,
but theres a hand print there.
I look on my hands and see bruises.
I am always crying on the inside,
and sometimes on the outside.
Is anybody listining?
I don’t think so,
I am so scared,
drownding out,
reaching out.
I am crying out and dying now,
reaching out and I need some help!!! -Jen

BlueTails
26-06-2005, 11:15 PM
Nice Jen xD 8/10 :)

=Jen=
27-06-2005, 01:59 AM
Thanks, Took me about 45 mins to an hour. ;) My mom freaked out over it tho :s dunno why?? :s

Janumz
27-06-2005, 12:15 PM
O.o Nice poem..

Your mum probably freaked out over it because it's like you're hurting a lot.. maybe she thinks/thought you're depressed?

Ferccia
27-06-2005, 12:26 PM
Wow, great poem!! :)
9/10 Well done Jen :D

=Jen=
28-06-2005, 03:24 AM
O.o Nice poem..

Your mum probably freaked out over it because it's like you're hurting a lot.. maybe she thinks/thought you're depressed? Yea I am, a lot, cause I have been thro my "friends" blaming ME for THEM try to kill themselves. :'( :eusa_shhh

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