What you think ?

[Jebbo]

Second layout
what do you think??




http://img37.picoodle.com/data/img37/3/8/16/f_m_ef13db4.png

[Plux]

Reminds of a Habbo site, mainly because of the boxes.
When the white clashes into the grey gradient, it looks horrible.

[Jebbo]

Better?

http://img37.picoodle.com/data/img37/3/8/16/f_m_445bc58.png

[Plux]

Better?

http://img37.picoodle.com/data/img37/3/8/16/f_m_445bc58.png

With the gradient issue.
Yes.

[Johno]

It still needs a lot of work, for a second layout its not terrible - things I would recommend doing:



Try experimenting with less, eye-melting colours - Vibrancy is good but it needs to be used in small doses!
Filler Text is a wonderful thing - It lets us see how the site would look with actual content, would be nice if you included some! (http://www.lipsum.com/)
The layout its self looks like a habbo layout due to its seemingly pixel nature, have a look at some Photoshop tutorials and have a go making a more "professional" design.
You need to make sure stuff is aligned and also ensure there are no "errors" - For example, in the left bar you have a pixel error.
Inspiration is a great thing! See a nice layout, take some inspiration from it. I like to make a kind of "collage" with pieces from sites that I like and then I try to inject some of my own personal feelings!

So yeah :) Some tips I guess lol!

[Plux]

I believe it's lipsum.org Johno! :)

[Johno]

Lipsum.com works as well.

The generator is on the right of the page, around half-way down :)

[Meti]

Ewww.. Disgusting. But it's your second :P

Anyways, it looks too plain. And I'm not to sure about the white things around the layout. And it needs texts, so we can see how it'd look when it's coded ;)

[SUPERhanna.]

all the redness hurts my eyes a lil bit :)

[Jebbo]

Edited again:

http://img27.picoodle.com/data/img27/3/8/17/f_text2m_238e606.png

[RSTurbo]

Eww.
Practise more :)

[Johno]

Nope, It doesnt look right!

The font should be in a "regular" font such as Verdana and have it a reasonable size where it doesnt look bold or terrible pixelated!

The navigation doesnt seem right either, it should be vertically centered within the grey box and also horizontally centered :)

It needs alot more work, it could be better off starting afresh!