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Jme
19-08-2008, 05:42 PM
This is a blog layout I started working on when I was bored. It’s far from finished I’m just posting on here to get some feedback on what I have at the moment.

http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/232/7/8/787c5ea63d9e2fa68cae86d45343ade2.png

View the articles at either;
http://www.jamiecassidy.net/blog-template/
or
http://jme90.deviantart.com/art/Blog-Layout-WIP-95346026

It's nothing special, but whatever.
I know the sidebar boxes look lame at the moment, I’m still working on a better look for them.

C&C Please :)

Thanks,
Jamie.

Source
19-08-2008, 06:00 PM
I really don't like it, fonts are too big on the right and the background green is really horrible, for me personally.

Another thing I see is most of your layouts look exactly the same/ follow the same style.

Excellent1
19-08-2008, 06:02 PM
Not too sure I like it, also the pointers are too 'pointy' if that makes sense.

Jme
19-08-2008, 06:20 PM
I really don't like it, fonts are too big on the right and the background green is really horrible, for me personally.

Another thing I see is most of your layouts look exactly the same/ follow the same style.

Thanks for the feedback.
Find one of my layouts that looks exactly the same as this one. If you mean exactly the same as in 2 columned then that's not exactly the same. Alot of sites have 2 column layouts.

Hayd93
19-08-2008, 06:23 PM
I accually really like this. One of the best layouts i have seen in a long time, well done.

Dentafrice
19-08-2008, 06:30 PM
Looks pretty good :) Where does everyone get this 'do not copy' thing.

Stepheen
19-08-2008, 06:42 PM
Looks lovely darl
The points on the speech bubbles are abit to narrow and high.
+Rep xo

EDIT: Need to spread

Jme
19-08-2008, 06:43 PM
Thanks guys.
I use Batch Watermark to do that, Caleb.

Edited by lAscend (Forum Super Moderator): Posts merged due to lag.

Calon
19-08-2008, 07:02 PM
All your layouts look the same, but with a few different elements.

It's a nice layout, but I don't see why a blog layout would need so many boxes.

Monopoly
19-08-2008, 07:15 PM
All your layouts look the same, but with a few different elements.

It's a nice layout, but I don't see why a blog layout would need so many boxes.

You can see what the boxes are doing on the image...

Calon
19-08-2008, 07:24 PM
You can see what the boxes are doing on the image...
Yes, but you wouldn't have that many, it would just be one tiny box.

The spaces between the box






SORT of irritate me too.

Jme
19-08-2008, 08:29 PM
Yes, but you wouldn't have that many, it would just be one tiny box.

The spaces between the box






SORT of irritate me too.

Would you rather it was all crushed up together?

Calon
19-08-2008, 08:33 PM
Would you rather it was all crushed up together?
A little bit closer together

Jme
19-08-2008, 09:07 PM
A little bit closer together

I don't see why that annoys you so much haha. They're not exactly miles apart.

redtom
19-08-2008, 10:23 PM
Thanks for the feedback.
Find one of my layouts that looks exactly the same as this one.

Its not really exactly the same but remove the colours from your portfolio and this layout and they are very close.


I don't see why that annoys you so much haha. They're not exactly miles apart.

Why not try and use what he’s said to improve on this instead of just rejecting what he says, you post it as a WIP asking for people’s views (there opinions) and to give you feedback, try and actually use what they say to help improve upon what you can do, because if you don't you’re going to go nowhere fast.

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I think what you should do is rethink the background of this design, I feel that just a change in colour will completely change the layout for the better, also again your staying along the same type of style, I would suggest you make 2 or 3 clan/gaming templates they are of a completely different style to what your currently designing and I think this could help you break this habit.

Jme
20-08-2008, 02:49 AM
Its not really exactly the same but remove the colours from your portfolio and this layout and they are very close.



Why not try and use what he’s said to improve on this instead of just rejecting what he says, you post it as a WIP asking for people’s views (there opinions) and to give you feedback, try and actually use what they say to help improve upon what you can do, because if you don't you’re going to go nowhere fast.

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I think what you should do is rethink the background of this design, I feel that just a change in colour will completely change the layout for the better, also again your staying along the same type of style, I would suggest you make 2 or 3 clan/gaming templates they are of a completely different style to what your currently designing and I think this could help you break this habit.

Well, I've had mixxed reviews on the green, so i'm unsure what to do. Every product is going to have something that some people wont like but others will.

As for the gaming template, I don't play alot of games except for PES or Madden NFL really.

I done a re-design anyway. Let me know if it's better or worse:
http://www.tehupload.com/uploads/0137bfc644d5471blog2_w.png

I removed the sidebar because it really was ugly. I'll redesign that layer.

Meti
20-08-2008, 01:04 PM
I don't like it that much. Some things are good, like the content box. But not the things in it.

But it's good to see you use other colours than that blue one :)

Jme
20-08-2008, 03:56 PM
Which is better? The first or second one?

Meti
20-08-2008, 04:06 PM
Second one.

Jme
20-08-2008, 06:15 PM
Yeah, i think i prefare the darker one too.

redtom
20-08-2008, 06:17 PM
As for the gaming template, I don't play alot of games except for PES or Madden NFL really.

Thats not the point, if you design a couple of clan templates and go back to your normal type of layouts you'll find that you'll have broken the habit of designing with the same style most of the time.

Also clan type templates is where all the easy money is. :P

Meti
20-08-2008, 07:02 PM
If you add a nice navigation on the second layout, it will look good ;)

Jme
20-08-2008, 07:50 PM
Thats not the point, if you design a couple of clan templates and go back to your normal type of layouts you'll find that you'll have broken the habit of designing with the same style most of the time.

Also clan type templates is where all the easy money is. :P
Thanks, I'll give it a go.

If you add a nice navigation on the second layout, it will look good ;)
There's already a navigation, lol.

kk.
21-08-2008, 06:09 PM
i think people are missing the point. Its going to be similar to his layout at the moment because it has to be designed around that as the systems been created that way.

Very nice. Not sure about the green BG, seems a bit too bright to use it all the time but good job still

Andys
21-08-2008, 06:47 PM
It's nice but I really don't think green goes with grey.

Jme
23-08-2008, 03:09 AM
It's nice but I really don't think green goes with grey.

On which one, the first or second?

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