Another poem: Two Dead Girls

[!star--girl!]

Erm... i'm not really proud on this but okay...:


two dead girls
walking the line
breathing, just barely
living a lie
the both of us
her and me
i know i'm dead
and so is she
i bleed, she screams
we torture ourselves
she is fading fast
i am already gone
will anyone see
the blood on the floor
will anyone hear
the echoes of screams
of two dead girls
long long gone
don't cry for us

[Krypsis]

Yeh its nice i think you deserves 10's all the way for your effort infact rep coming up and i think my rep counts as 3 or 4 as its so high :)

[!star--girl!]

:o thanks, really