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redtom
02-09-2008, 07:05 PM
This is the first layout I've made in ages for my self, it was really quick apart from the boxes I spent a little bit of time on them there the first sort of 3d icons I've done, I was going to do 3 but didn't have the time.

Link (www.angel-hosting.co.uk)

Any thoughts?

Blob
02-09-2008, 07:09 PM
The box images stripes are not aligned with the backgrounds stripes. Other than that, its fit.

Where do you get them sort of backgrounds from?

Meti
02-09-2008, 07:49 PM
Hmm. i don't like it. Is it a hosting company? Then i really don't like it.

Looks allright. But if it is a hosting layout, you should do something which looks like a hosting layout ;)

redtom
02-09-2008, 09:48 PM
The box images stripes are not aligned with the backgrounds stripes. Other than that, its fit.

I tryed having them with transparent backgrounds but they had a white out line around them because of the effects on them and it looked really bad so I just sliced them quickly with the background, make it look mess I know but I was kinda in a rush at the time.


Where do you get them sort of backgrounds from?

Found it ages ago, heres (http://www.tehupload.com/uploads/69201db20664ac2wood.jpg) the image if you want it.


Hmm. i don't like it. Is it a hosting company? Then i really don't like it.

Looks allright. But if it is a hosting layout, you should do something which looks like a hosting layout ;)

I like to make designs for my personal sites unquie (If anyone remembers my image hosting site that layout was very diffrent from the norm) and I felt like a change, I've been asked to design lots of hosting templates over the holidays for clients so I wanted to do something diffrent but at the same time I didn't want to make a template I wouldn't use, the only thing I needed a template for was angel-hosting, and this is what I came up with.

edit: I was going to rep you both but I have to spread

Excellent1
02-09-2008, 11:28 PM
What a bloody good design tom, you're progressing with each design I feel, perhaps you should work on that logo more though :) Well done.

Florx
02-09-2008, 11:31 PM
Nicely done, if the stripe/box problem is sorted out - would be fantastic.

Clean, simple, maybe a bit too dark for me.

REPPPAAGGEEE :)

Coldplay
02-09-2008, 11:46 PM
Don't like it too much, It's all over the place - The text that is.

Daphne,
03-09-2008, 08:39 AM
From a viewer's point-of-view, I'd say it just needs a little more structure and neatneess to it.
:)

Jahova
03-09-2008, 08:47 AM
It's nice but I wouldn't say it suits the hosting business.

redtom
03-09-2008, 03:00 PM
What a bloody good design tom, you're progressing with each design I feel, perhaps you should work on that logo more though :) Well done.

Thanks, its no where near my best.

I think I'm going to stop doing layouts for a little bit and try and get better a logos and icons, I pretty much suck at logos atm.


Nicely done, if the stripe/box problem is sorted out - would be fantastic.

Clean, simple, maybe a bit too dark for me.

REPPPAAGGEEE :)

Thanks, I'll try and sort it out.


Don't like it too much, It's all over the place - The text that is.

Any ideas on cleaning it up?


From a viewer's point-of-view, I'd say it just needs a little more structure and neatneess to it.
:)

Okay I'll try and add a bit more structure.


It's nice but I wouldn't say it suits the hosting business.

Yeah, but like I said I wanted it to be diffrent from the norm.

Coldplay
03-09-2008, 05:21 PM
I'd say have the text in a neat order, like, asthetically, in boxes of whatever, and have tabs, because it's all a bit much on the eye.

craigg.
03-09-2008, 05:25 PM
Not bad for a quick layout. I think it would need more work though - I'm guessing those white highlights at the top are just a white gradient, try changing it to "soft light" or "overlay" if you use PS. It's looking a bit bare, try adding a few images to make it more snazzy.

Your design/coding isn't friendly on screen sizes. A default 1024 x 768 screen size messes up the packages nav. Try adding a fixed width to your div to stop the div collapsing. To test a smaller screen type "javascript:setSize(1024,768)" in your browser.

Overall, it's good for a quick job.

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