A little help?

[PaintYourTarget]

http://www.tehupload.com/uploads/94610cc0773bdf2ship7.png

Just fancy getting some feedback on this before I go and finish it. Erm, need some advice on the structure, proportions and quite possibly the shades on it.

I know the bottom needs constructing, the bow needs wrap around shading and it needs the details finishing, so.

So, opinions?

If a mod could merge?

Edited by HELPER-Ghost (Forum Moderator): Posts merged due to forum lag

[Ekalb]

Hmm are you using any particular reference picture(s)?

[Boonzeet]

Your lines are too messy at the front of the boat.

[Hiro]

Looks pretty good atm, btw ;)
I wanna see the finished result ;D

[X:RiX:X]

The bit in the middle of the boat looks really blocky give it some different shapes like balconies. windows and mabye curve it slightly at the top

hope that helps for now.

[PaintYourTarget]

Hmm are you using any particular reference picture(s)?
Nope, I'm not. Come on Blake, you know me ;D


Your lines are too messy at the front of the boat.
I used the MS Paint Curve tool to construct them and give a basic shape, I was going to go back and smooth them when I focused on it. I was also considering AAing the whole thing. Yes/no?


Looks pretty good atm, btw ;)
I wanna see the finished result ;D
Thanks =]


The bit in the middle of the boat looks really blocky give it some different shapes like balconies. windows and mabye curve it slightly at the top
I'd played around adding windows but I haven't found a shape I thought suited it yet, but I do fully intend to sort that out - might just lift some off habbo :P
Though, good idea for the balconies. I think some ladders and gantries are also in order. I just hit a artists block when I got up this WIP and didn't know where to go.

Cheers everyone, I'll +rep those of you who I can.

[ItsDave]

I dunno but from what I see it looks like the out of COD4, you should see if you could do that one out of of COD4, It just resembles it tbh and then you'd get a pretty good view of what you'd be doing. But the one Im on about is apserloutly massive, so if you have the game, just take main parts out of it and use them for your art. Sorry Im of no better help.

[PaintYourTarget]

I dunno but from what I see it looks like the out of COD4, you should see if you could do that one out of of COD4, It just resembles it tbh and then you'd get a pretty good view of what you'd be doing. But the one Im on about is apserloutly massive, so if you have the game, just take main parts out of it and use them for your art. Sorry Im of no better help.
Ah, this one. I see where you're going with that, might point it that way. Yeah, I'll look into adapting parts from that. Thanks.

[Hiro]

That second image you posted has disappeared :O!
The one with squares at the back of the boat.

[PaintYourTarget]

That second image you posted has disappeared :O!
The one with squares at the back of the boat.
Yeah, the mod merged them thinking it was forum lag. Cba to p/m and resolve it.