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manga21
28-06-2005, 06:32 PM
My 1st alt done from scratch

:)please and tell me area of importment :)
thanks
http://img269.echo.cx/img269/84/lightalt1re.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

Azza
28-06-2005, 06:33 PM
Its quite big.
if it was better sized, like habbo size.
6.5/10
bottom looks papery and some lines look wobbly

Lozzoling
28-06-2005, 06:34 PM
are u being serious??

1.too big
2. not isometric
3. not proper shading
4. the legs aren't made 3d
5.pixel errors
6. top is out of perspective

1/10

manga21
28-06-2005, 06:39 PM
are u being serious??

1.too big
2. not isometric
3. not proper shading
4. the legs aren't made 3d
5.pixel errors
6. top is out of perspective

1/10

Pixel errors, god every alt has one waht are they?

Didnt isay its my frsit alt?
isometric dont get you
i konw not proper shading i know its too big
look i am just starting doing alts i know the legs arnt 3d i am going to work on it make it look a bit woody like the speaker and stuff and make the light better
What is wrong with the shading?

Roboevil
28-06-2005, 06:56 PM
You should size it down a bit, the shape of it is rather Japanese but it still look's right I think. 5/10 :s.

manga21
28-06-2005, 07:16 PM
yes its ment to be, when i get better at alting iam going to make a japnese
type of furni, but at the moment i want to class it as area

Krypsis
28-06-2005, 08:25 PM
Its ok, Quite nice 7.8/10

Dazzle
28-06-2005, 08:35 PM
:o Not the right size, and also not isometric! 4/10

Barmi
28-06-2005, 08:40 PM
Isometic is the viewpoint Habbo Hotel is viewed in. Look at other alts and you will understand. Yup, not isometric, shading is minimal, it does not feel 3-D at all, it feels flat. It is far too big, and it lacks any real texture. Sorry, does not feel very alike to Habbo. 2/10. Good luck on your next piece!

=Jen=
28-06-2005, 11:36 PM
Actually thats pretty good for your 1st alt!! Just tone the size down. :rolleyes:

manga21
29-06-2005, 03:50 PM
Isometic what does this mean?

Noble
29-06-2005, 09:53 PM
Sorry .. a little too big. 6/10.

Dan Williamson
29-06-2005, 10:04 PM
C'mon People Post Your Alts And Lets See Some Of Yours... Your Groaning Because The Size... And It's Not Isomentric So What, It's His First try... Well Done Manga 9/10

Dudeitsme
30-06-2005, 11:59 AM
are u being serious??

1.too big
2. not isometric
3. not proper shading
4. the legs aren't made 3d
5.pixel errors
6. top is out of perspective

1/10
Lozzo you are sooooo rude talking bout are you serious of course he is thats why he posted it surely your first alt from scratch wasent the bomb digity either
anyways work on it youll get better 7/10

deltateamaplha
30-06-2005, 12:51 PM
it's nice :eusa_danc

Punk Rock Star
30-06-2005, 01:00 PM
It's not properly shapen and too big 6.5/10

-=rooty987=-
30-06-2005, 04:40 PM
Did you do that on paint?
3/10
Love Dan
xxx

manga21
30-06-2005, 05:31 PM
Yes...
I need to egtt my photoshop back waht otehr programs can i use?

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