[Xzoid] A new alteration

[ItsDave]

Hi, started this about a night ago. Thought it'd look good. Bit dissapointed with it but majorly impressed myself making the bin. New ideas for it welcome too.
So yeah, c & c and /10. Thanks very much :)
http://uploadpicz.com/images/HTLLXI7.png (http://uploadpicz.com)


Erm also W.I.Ps if you have any queries:- http://uploadpicz.com/images/4CHYB3D.png (http://uploadpicz.com)

[NitronGalactus]

The bad's colour is off, looks good though.

[PaintYourTarget]

Would never doubt your work dude =]
The only problem I have with it is that the Wheelie Bin is taller than the Habbo - should really be chest height. Easily solved by just taking it straight down a few pixels with the lasso on Paint... go for the bottom straight line to keep the curve. Reckon 5 pixels should do it?
The bag I love, but I also think it's a bit too big and round too, could also do with being closer to your Habbo.
The black line down the corner of the house bugs me, and the rather simple texturing on the manhole cover - sorrry =[
The white road line also looks like it protrudes from the road, not actually on it - but I don't know how to resolve that - unless you break into it by like, chipping parts of the paint off to give a faded, weathered look.

Error wise though, it's perfect. The shapes, shading and line art are all terrific - but it's what I expect from you so :p

[Liberational]

Yes id say fix the weelie bin up a bit, there is an obvious line towards the left of it which needs fixing a bit... but what I can say is that your details are great. Well done, 7/10

[L?KE]

I love that.

Perhaps the habbo should have his hand on the bag though?

[ItsDave]

Yes id say fix the weelie bin up a bit, there is an obvious line towards the left of it which needs fixing a bit... but what I can say is that your details are great. Well done, 7/10

If I didn't curve it it would look out of proportion. :s


I love that.

Perhaps the habbo should have his hand on the bag though?

He sort of does... its the bright pinkish colour thing surrounding the top of the bag.


Would never doubt your work dude =]
The only problem I have with it is that the Wheelie Bin is taller than the Habbo - should really be chest height. Easily solved by just taking it straight down a few pixels with the lasso on Paint... go for the bottom straight line to keep the curve. Reckon 5 pixels should do it?
The black line down the corner of the house bugs me, and the rather simple texturing on the manhole cover - sorrry =[
The white road line also looks like it protrudes from the road, not actually on it - but I don't know how to resolve that - unless you break into it by like, chipping parts of the paint off to give a faded, weathered look.


I'll look into re building the big size/height.
I'll redo the black line. I didn't think it looked great... but too what...
I honestly cant weather a white line without making it look very bad quality/cheap. And some white lines are a bit high but, argh I'll see what I can do.

Heres the edit... tell me what you think;
http://uploadpicz.com/images/324X6EQ.png (http://uploadpicz.com)

[Liberational]

Yes I just think it looks a little too off thats all...

[ItsDave]

too off? Care to explain?

[PaintYourTarget]

I think you should go for the white line on the cement between the bricks and maybe a lighter brown on the actual bricks. I know it's annoying and picky, but it might work.
If I wanted to be really fussy I'd ask you to change one of the walls to a darker shade, but I think it looks alright as it is so i wont.

But the Bin's spot on now. I've just noticed the detail on the door too - that's awesome.