-[MACCA]- Grunge desk

[maccarox481]

Hey all this is made from scratch 100% by me. It's not the best but i have tried to make my own thing from start to finish and i did it. Plz rate out of 10 and say how i could improve it and also give me some sudgestions on other things i could make.

The 1st 3 are WIPs and the 4th is my final copy.

[X:RiX:X]

The actual concept isnt bad at all, just look at the grunge furni and take small bits of it to make it fit in with the rest of the furni, use the same grain on the wood as the grunge table does and dont make your black lines too thick on the right and left sides, but its not too bad just have more detail.
6/10 hope this helps =]

[Kyle]

its really small and... well... rubbish

[Con]

it is rather small and probably wouldn't fit into the habbo squares :D
Try and make it so it fit's them and take more time on the wood grain, Or do what RiX said and take the grain from the grunge furni :D:D

[ItsDave]

Nothings grungey about it. Soz lulz

[Kyle]

Nothings grungey about it. Soz lulz
THERES A HOLE IN THE GLASS GOD R U BLIND!!!! :@

[Swinkid]

It isn't 'rubbish' as others have said. Yes i think there is room for improvement, but i think it shouldn't be under habbo alterations. Insted under other graphics because this is just normal pixel work. It dosen't look anything at all habbo would have.

Thanks, Swinkid.

[Boonzeet]

its really small and... well... rubbish

hahahaha.

LOL +rep

I agree tho.

[luce]

Nice work well done :) x

[maccarox481]

Rix thankyou for the critisism and i will try to improve.

O and to the others i want help not ****

[maccarox481]

Hey all is this any better i have fitted it to the grid and it wasnt "wood grain" they are scratches and vandalism. so plz comment on new image and old and rate out of 10http://uploadpicz.com/images/DECL7Y6.png

[ItsDave]

I dont know what it is, but it just doesn't have the feel to it. :/ Umm, I think its the lines which you've done to try and make it wooden. I think they just dont suit it. I dont know... look at other grungey items and see what makes them grungey and add them in or something. This just doesn't look right.

[reeana]

It's because he hasn't done any shading.

[maccarox481]

hey how is this
http://uploadpicz.com/images/UEE8H8E.png

[Liberational]

What you want to do is this:

- first of all, all those outlines on your alt which aren't directly AROUND the alt, you turn to a darker colour of the main alt you have use, so in this case it would infact be... Brown
- secondly, I would personally get rid of those lines and do straight ones [straight as in for the desk] and do them in the same colour but not all round, use them very subtly.
- Thirdly, to get more of a grunge effect if you can do it, I would make the broken glass hole a bit bigger, maybe take up the whole bottom left corner with it.
- Fourth, as for your glass, glass is alot thicker than that so what you need to do in future is draw it so the glass is basically 1 pixel thick. It just makes it more 3D. [I have just seen that you did it for the top glass but not the glass on the windows]
- Fifth, I wouldn't put those red lines there because too be quite honest I haven't a clue what they are...
-Sixth, When it comes to the little pull out thing for your desk, you should use a darker shade of brown to go round the right hand side and bottom of it.

It is decent, but there are a lot of things that you need to do. You asked for help so I am giving it to you. If you dont understand something I have put or want help with alting just pm me and I will be happy to help. So far I would say your on a 5/10, but if you make the changes ive put im sure you will get boosted up to 8 maybe even 9 /10.

[maccarox481]

Hey how is this version?

http://img217.imageshack.us/my.php?image=deskv2tw7.png

[scott]

I cant see anything...? :P

[Samishlol]

Woww sorry but i don't like them.

[MrJosh]

Woahhhh, nice one! Good work, 9/10!

[maccarox481]

Thanks for all your comments but even i still think it looks weird can anybody give some advice?

[Accipiter]

Heres some advice, Quit on the Macca desk and try something different ;D

[maccarox481]

saddly i probobly agree with you but i want to somehow make it less disgusting

[Meti]

Looks allright.

Could improve.

[Tim.]

Looks good just not sure about the wood lines mabey make them a little better/real