View Full Version : [Alteration] Planes :D
Accipiter
13-09-2008, 03:51 PM
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With Side Kick :D /\
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ItsDave
13-09-2008, 07:46 PM
Some parts are TOO shaded and so looks terrible in place. And the flat bit right on the nose of the plane just doesnt look right, try and round it off.
ItsDave
13-09-2008, 08:09 PM
Very nice well done x
? Theres plenty of pixel and shading errors.
? Theres plenty of pixel and shading errors.
And? Doesnt make me incredibly bad. I like it, just because there's errors doesnt mean its extremely bad.
Its good ^^, fix some stuff here n there, but overall its a good effort.
ItsDave
13-09-2008, 08:21 PM
And? Doesnt make me incredibly bad. I like it, just because there's errors doesnt mean its extremely bad.
Its good ^^, fix some stuff here n there, but overall its a good effort.
OMG YOUR BACK, WHY DID YOU GET BANNED?
OMG YOUR BACK, WHY DID YOU GET BANNED?
I was back like the next day O.O. And because i was constantly negative. (mega lulz).
I think the main thing you should fix is the nose of the plane (the shape)
ItsDave
13-09-2008, 08:32 PM
Ah.. lol, looks like I'll be heading that way sooon then. Well its nice to know I noticed you back
H0BJ0B
13-09-2008, 10:51 PM
The propellors are facing me but the plane is facing the parrot on my shoulder.
Very nice alteration though ;)
AndrewByrne
14-09-2008, 06:16 PM
Its orginal + nice ;]
PaintYourTarget
14-09-2008, 06:24 PM
The nose is hideously uncurved and the cockpit really flat looking.
You have highlighted shading on the wings when it should be a darker colour - I presume it's meant to be flaps. Flaps are seperated with an indent, which usually collects a shadow, not light catching off it, especially in that position. They don't follow the curves of the wing either.
Props are isometric and the moving effect doesn't quite work. Try and have them blend into the grey motion circle by making more of the grey lines you added, but in the varying shades of grey you've already used. On the plus side, well done on remembering to make sure you can identify the red in the background.
The body looks very much like a block of red - I think some dithering and perhaps another shade of red might make it slightly more curved and metallic.
The crocodile confuses me.
SkiitlesMan
14-09-2008, 06:54 PM
The nose is hideously uncurved and the cockpit really flat looking.
You have highlighted shading on the wings when it should be a darker colour - I presume it's meant to be flaps. Flaps are seperated with an indent, which usually collects a shadow, not light catching off it, especially in that position. They don't follow the curves of the wing either.
Props are isometric and the moving effect doesn't quite work. Try and have them blend into the grey motion circle by making more of the grey lines you added, but in the varying shades of grey you've already used. On the plus side, well done on remembering to make sure you can identify the red in the background.
The body looks very much like a block of red - I think some dithering and perhaps another shade of red might make it slightly more curved and metallic.
The crocodile confuses me.
Ever thought of looking at the good points?
Anyways Nice job! I like it :D
GhostFace-
14-09-2008, 06:55 PM
redo the nose and are the sides even?
PaintYourTarget
14-09-2008, 07:00 PM
Ever thought of looking at the good points?
Anyways Nice job! I like it :D
"On the plus side, well done on remembering to make sure you can identify the red in the background."
I did.
Liberational
15-09-2008, 09:04 AM
I would lower the right wing and fix the nose of the plane, make it a bit more... pointy. I would say that for the alt you did very well, I always struggle with planes and cars so well done.
Rockcuteman..
18-09-2008, 06:32 PM
ARghh How Do you do These alterations i wanna do one;(
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