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Vause
29-06-2005, 05:06 PM
I am kinda addicted now! I have wrote another poem / article!!
Please rate it. I wrote it while my internet was down last night!

You belong with me.

You don't feel it, but it's true.

You left me a while ago.

And i guess, i'm just falling appart.

I hold my head in my hands, telling myself it's not true. I try so hard.

It's running through my mind, over and over.

Your gone, it's over.

I can't change that at all. Although i might try, i guess it's just not going to work.

I love you, you just can't see.

That you mean, just this much to me.

You don't feel it. It's obvious.

But you say " i want to be freinds!"

That's fine, we get on well.

Your gone though. I can't imagine, I can't get this out of my head.

The fact that, Your Gone. It's over.

Some thing's are better left unsaid. This may have been one of them, but it need's to be of my chest.

Maybe one day, you will return. Maybe my heart will just be left to burn.

It's your choice, that i cannot change.

So it's over, i'm telling it to myself. Over and over.

Goodbye is the HARDEST word i will ever have to say to you.

But i guess, now is just the time.

Friends forever though, you see me as a friend. I see you as my whole world, my everything.

The hardest thing you can ever do, is to watch someone you love, love someone else.

xsaucy-stephx
29-06-2005, 05:18 PM
thts is lyk the sweetest thing i ever read!
its just soooo true! :)

Steph
xx

Rebecca
24-07-2005, 09:23 AM
omg steph i love yor sig hu made it.
pmsl!

xsaucy-stephx
24-07-2005, 10:05 AM
omg steph i love yor sig hu made it.
pmsl!
lmao bex
im sry i cant quite remember... :p

Steph
xx

P.S I forgot to rate the poem! I give it 5
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KickerFliper
24-07-2005, 10:32 AM
;'(

So perfect

;'(

Its making me cry

;'(

1000000000/10


You should be a writer :P
Not a trialist

MsTanya
24-07-2005, 10:42 AM
Awwww :(
Touching

Vause
24-07-2005, 11:11 AM
rofl. yes i am on trail as a writer yayay!

Tristan
01-08-2005, 03:18 PM
Well Good!

Evil Mariah Carey!

Copying The name of ur poem and making it a song!

Evil ! Evil ! EVIL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:p

wait a sec i havent read it yet Lol once i saw we belong together i started singin it and i forgot too actually just look at the poem ;) Lol

GoldenGrahams
02-08-2005, 03:21 PM
Not bad, but plenty of spelling and grammar mistakes there. But hey, nobody's perfect. ;)

Rou
07-08-2005, 12:14 PM
Bet You Get High Marks In English :p

Adam$
06-09-2005, 08:31 AM
Good work. <3

Achieve
10-09-2005, 02:23 PM
Very good 10 /10 :D

chipie60
13-09-2005, 08:36 PM
Tres good mes Emaa <3 ;) Ooer whos it about i wonder.

.:BlueWave:.
14-09-2005, 07:14 PM
Yayayay Nice writing Emma <3 :D

Catchetat
15-09-2005, 01:59 PM
mariah carey lol-

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