Aplication help

[oli1122]

can any one help with my application plz i need feedback
listen to me clip HERE http://audio.habboupload.com/1221713097.mp3

can you give me any tips???

thankx
oli1122

[SUPERhanna.]

it sounds rly good, idk what tips.

you need to mae urself stand out, full of enthusiasm and energy, make sure your not reading from a script it needs to sound natural :)

Good luck with your app xx

[marriott0.01]

It does sound really good as Hana said, but a few things to note is to turn your mic up a wee bit, because it's very quiet. Also as Hanna said sound like you've just drunk 5 cups of coffee not just taken an overdose of Sleeping Pills :D Try to sound like your getting them pumped up and ready to party.

And good luck when Applications Open :D

[SUPERhanna.]

I wouldn't say 5 cups of coffee, just cheery like u rlyy wanna dj. If you don't sound happy, the listners won't be happy ;)

[,Jess,]

it sounds rly good, idk what tips.

you need to mae urself stand out, full of enthusiasm and energy, make sure your not reading from a script it needs to sound natural :)

Good luck with your app xx

That's really good advice because atm that clip sounds like what a lot of people send in and although it's not bad it's not going to stand out.

[Supersam]

I wouldn't say 5 cups of coffee, just cheery like u rlyy wanna dj. If you don't sound happy, the listners won't be happy ;)

5 cups is far too much...

I would say just make sure you have fun and sound like your having fun! :)

[leah]

don't try and sound like you've drank loads of coffee sound happy, make sure the speech is clear and just be yourself. :) Goodluck

[KnuxIBF]

Good application, but back off from the mic a bit. :P