MY Rubbish Alt Please Help

[Rockcuteman..]

http://uploadpicz.com/images/MVNUV3R.png

[ItsDave]

We can't help you unless we know what thats meant to be, or what he's standing on.

[1xBabyCakesx1]

You need to tell me what you need help on.

[banned]

rubbish? wth?! that's ART, my friend!

[Kyle]

Looks like he's pulled some kind of demented tree from the ground... :S

[DJ::Beatz]

I think its a balance thing, like in the circus, when they walk on something and have to balance, and they have that stick to help =]

[Liberational]

Iuno what it is, so ill make it general and call it some sort of "Stick":

1. Tell people what it is, otherwise we won't know
2. scale your picture down so there isnt any excess white
3. I think you have used the pencil to try and 'create' your own hand and same for the 'stick', so try to not use it and if you do use it only use it for individual pixels.
4. You shouldnt criticise your own work, thats for us to do. Be proud of what you have made :) I was more proud of my first alt than I was of my last.
5. I would honestly say dont try editing people just yet, stick to basic objects [its what i did] such as desks, cabinets, drawers, then start adding more features like shadows, grooves, dents, glass, stains etc. You have to work your way up from the bottom and in all honest, I can't do stuff like this... I really struggle when alting people but I think I am pretty good at alting furni.
6. When posting you should add a bit of writing, just to break the ice really...

[Things I would be saying if it were a little better]

7. You need to put a shadow in, which means you use a darker colour than the main colour and outline it, so you create a small [or thicker depending on the situation] line of dark brown following the black line to the right [or where your light is coming from]
8. For some reason you have taken the shadow out on the habbo.... Why? O.O You have done a good job on the tiles hes standing on but it would have been so much easier and so much more effective to just cut out 1 tile and keep the shadow and work from that.
9. Try to make the lines of the 'stick' smoother, follow the 2 pixels across, 1 down rule and if you want to make it more do 1 across and 1 down and less then do 3 across and 1 down.

Finally number 10 and the most important:

Keep at it!

6/10 for a first.
:) trust me, mine was alot worse than this!

[RedArmy]

Iuno what it is, so ill make it general and call it some sort of "Stick":

1. Tell people what it is, otherwise we won't know
2. scale your picture down so there isnt any excess white
3. I think you have used the pencil to try and 'create' your own hand and same for the 'stick', so try to not use it and if you do use it only use it for individual pixels.
4. You shouldnt criticise your own work, thats for us to do. Be proud of what you have made :) I was more proud of my first alt than I was of my last.
5. I would honestly say dont try editing people just yet, stick to basic objects [its what i did] such as desks, cabinets, drawers, then start adding more features like shadows, grooves, dents, glass, stains etc. You have to work your way up from the bottom and in all honest, I can't do stuff like this... I really struggle when alting people but I think I am pretty good at alting furni.
6. When posting you should add a bit of writing, just to break the ice really...

[Things I would be saying if it were a little better]

7. You need to put a shadow in, which means you use a darker colour than the main colour and outline it, so you create a small [or thicker depending on the situation] line of dark brown following the black line to the right [or where your light is coming from]
8. For some reason you have taken the shadow out on the habbo.... Why? O.O You have done a good job on the tiles hes standing on but it would have been so much easier and so much more effective to just cut out 1 tile and keep the shadow and work from that.
9. Try to make the lines of the 'stick' smoother, follow the 2 pixels across, 1 down rule and if you want to make it more do 1 across and 1 down and less then do 3 across and 1 down.

Finally number 10 and the most important:

Keep at it!

6/10 for a first.
:) trust me, mine was alot worse than this!
I agree ^^

You have to look on other alts, and see how they are made, and do like they do.