Cheese!

[Steven]

Yes. Well it's 5:45am and I was bored and I was eating cheese so I attempted a rubbish alt of cheese I done one normal and one with shading this is my first try at shading and it's terrible! so rate it out of 10 and give come constructive critisim.
Thanks you

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y247/rottenmarmalade/cheese.png

[=Jen=]

MORE HOLES! Lmao!! 8/10

[Steven]

Lmao!
Thanks.
It's my first ever proper thingo
Although I'm new to this, I still need some tutorials<3

[Azza]

Odd... cheese :p
8/1o randish idea..

[Jashmine]

I want cheeeseeeee
Give me the cheese please? O=]
But yeah, it looks like it could do with a hole or two in the middle :o

[Mr.Kylee]

I'd say much more holes too :o and more shading. 7/10 :p

[Roboevil]

...How annoying, everything I wanted to say has been said, Mer!
Well anyhoo, more shading, it doesn't look right, and there are only holes around the outside...

[kasi]

rofl cheese :)

[Punk Rock Star]

It's cool I LOVE cheese! 8/10

[Ferccia]

Mmm Cheeeese! :D
Its pretty good :)
I'll give you an 8/10
Nice job! :-]

[AngJum]

Nice cheese Steven! Gimme some xD

It's good, maybe more shading and definetly more holes!

[Steven]

I know I know ''more holes''
Well er.. I can try... but I won't get it right.
It was only a small thing I done in the early hours of the morn! >_>

[Yayse]

why were up at 5 ste? very keen perhaps? xD lubb the shaded cheese! u should make a mouse and some crumbs ^-^ still, with the shading its an 8-9/10

[Punky]

Not all chesse had holes O.o.

It needs more shading, looks pretty cool though *takes a bite* Yummy!

[Steven]

Thank you all for being so kind. I am working on a mouse xD

[Y!]

It need more holes, it needs more tone, 8/10.